good premisse, had potential, it's well written. however, out of nowhere it got confirmed that it is a cultivation novel, people saying "mortals"and don't even get started with the stupid logic of tiered cities, I mean has a lambo and a gigantic villa,but it sucks because it's from a low grade city? so in the big cities are all the houses made of gold? do they fly? what are hey made of? and the hidden cultivation families. .. . meh I thought it was going to be a urban fantasy with mild superpowers like hero academia, just more hidden, but it's not at all.
I did give you a first power stone so please do everything to make your story more appealing I will continue to support this story till then you must do your best good luck author.
SRIUS, tidak ada yang memberi tags Tragic untuk novel ini??, Atau lemah ke kuat??, Sudah updatenya lama, ceritanya lama" kaya novel" naek juga yang udah stuck!!
