Orange_Coffee
The difference is in the plot. You can feel the loom of death in this one-room thriller comedy. One of a kind in a wuxia cutivation system setting.
heya author good work just dont become like others dropping their novels and using lame excuses just say you wont post for how long and just say if its drop so the readers wont wait for update
** i like your work
I know the author personally so I usually get to hear about these reviews on a less professional level. But even then I can harder tell the difference when reading a few of the spotlights that I’ve been able to read. He manages to continuously convey his true opinions about a story he has taken the time to truly critic without falling prey to others opinions. Another thing I’ll say from reading these is that he was able to peak my interest enough to make me want to read some of the Webtoons mentioned. An amazing series filled with puns that know no end and unique story lines that you should definitely check out.
This is good. . . .. .. . .. . .. . .. .. . .
Que decir, me flipan estas historias y las demás críticas me convencieron, supongo que editare ésto cuando me ponga al día con el fic.
Also, me re jugué starbound unas 5 veces, de seguro que me emocionarme con esas referencias :D
I really like this book! Everything that is intriguing about Chinese fantasy with a truly western perspective. Honestly a breath of fresh air for me. Maxcool, I really hope that it stays so compelling and away from the cliches that are so beloved. I'm really pulling for this novel!
Great story but lacks updates..... The rest after this is gibberish so I can get 140 characters..............ehcisbjdjvsnofyzhhekfhxbdki mhfuzhdnxky s to ugsnvkcgsntjvjgzmficgsh nmsj gejeiftwuqozkmx mjdk,icb as ny c vavqiZlsoqnxhfow
We'll,from what I had read in review,this novel is definitely **** since only a reader will know another reader....Haters or not,it's all plain in our eyes....Not that this is bad,no...It's just not our cup of tea...So author guy,although I haven't read and most probably will not,I sincerely wish you good luck....Write everything you want,it's yours after all....Don't mind the critique since what you love may be what people hate.....So,just pour out your idea and chapter,someday you will find a great fans....Since old saying,another man trash is another man treasure...Keep it up,ignore the bad critique unless you are an M...
I’m in love with how this story is going so far I can’t wait for future updates ????
Hello guys. \(^○^)人(^○^)/
I will keep it short and say that I am honored to share my work for hopefully millions of readers.
But that's for the future, as for now I will give some quick disclaimers about what should you expect.
First, I will release 1 chapter daily with average word count of 1600 to 2000.
secondly, I don't have editor yet, so please bear with my writing, as there will be a few typos and grammatical mistakes here and there.
Lastly, Background and MC foundation will take priority before games and battles! So no game in the first chapter. (~ ̄▽ ̄)~ sorry!
That's all for now.
Thank you, and I hope you have a nice day!
Well written story aimed at sporting enthusiasts using the common trope of reliving a life marred by regrets with a system that rewards effort and achievement with the athletic improvement needed to become the Greatest of All Time. This story is notable more for the execution than the idea, but is no less entertaining for that.
An interesting premise and decent idea.
HOWEVER :
1)The novel is very blatant in its "propaganda" for a certain country with the standard "this country is the only one with actual intelligence and civility, The rest are barbarians that want to join us."
2) This is a harem, The difference from the standard harem being that there is no romance. In other words the worst parts of harem only. MC is the only male even mentioned for the majority of the story.
3) Issues constantly regarding any mention of price as the translator couldn't copy-paste the symbol properly.
4) Very point to point. Curious if a certain character will be ongoing/reoccuring? Is she an attractive woman? If so then yes. Is the woman, who just turned up immediately after an info dump regarding a "mysterious" topic, related to said topic? Yes directly.
Overall : I despise harem but this novel could still be barrable if it weren't for the constant "meta commentary" and "Pro-(a certain country)" propaganda, It isn't even well masked.
This novel is around 70% pro-certain country propaganda and using false history to make it sound glorious, 10% describing women, 10% info dumping, 5% MC prattling about playing LoL and 5% of actual interesting story.
Would not recommend unless you are utterly desperate.
