I really want this story but im so sad that this novel only have a 300+ chapter. . How long it takes for the continuation of this story? Did webnovel lack of narrator / author for this kind of readings ? However , i looking forward that one day this novel will have a great translator who can give it a good released of chapters and will be able to make it to the next level ... .
So, I like your plot there! It is intriguing, the characters are entertaining too that makes it lively, which is a plus point. Overall, this story is a great one! Keep up the good work, Author!
Hooked after reading chapter 2. It's well written and I love the Idea of the story. From reading the latest chapter compared to the second one, though both of them are great, it's clear the author has improved the writing style even more. So far I also like all of the girls and hope the MC is successful in obtaining their hearts.
looks like a great novel that i will add to my library and check out when i get the chance..................................................
This is amazing.I am really feeling like I was also in there in the story.The characters are so much alive.I really like this story.Go on! An awesome story.
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The constant mix of present tense and past tense is reallly realllllly annoying. And after reading like 4 chaps, I still don't know if you intended to write things in present tense or past tense. Other than that, there's not much to badmouth regarding grammar. As for WOrld and character design, they're very very interesting. Everything's explained in a quick, no-nonsense manner, and you can see the characters' personalities oozing out from the pages.Some passages read in a bit of an exaggerated manner to emphasize plot points and character traits, but it's nothing too overbearing.As for story dev, I rly can't say much at this point in the novel
very good, i'm really enjoying the characters, i think there will be a lot to explain in the future, both about the MC's friends and the other guild members, keep up the great work
read it MC is super beta scared of everyting if he don't outlevel enemy by 10 times he will run away STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA STAY AWAY MC BETA
Amazing. This is great. Not many chapters, but I can already see the potential in this book. Can't wait for more chapters as Mian climbs up the ranks!
k how do I say it?? I don't comment or review mostly but now I felt like I should just do itmyou have a good writing style author I like the way you write fights. clearly only few characters are introduced till now it makes easy for me to not get confused.
Shameless author promoting my work.If you can get past my not so perfect English, and the fact that is the first time writing a novel, I hope you'll enjoy the world I'm creating born from countless nights without sleep ahah...Love to y'all