Im not an expert critic but if this is the work of a beginner then??Characters are fleshed out and not like paper. Besides with his death at 15 theres a lot of room for character development(and a lot if leeway for foolish mistakes unfortunately?)But all in all its a really good book[just some small things im confused with and how the author tends to forget some keypoints(not really key though but relevant)are the only bad things]Sorry for any errors i was in a rush
just got nothing to say .only to the old readers. that was read many stupid type novel .that it will make your mood blow of and hit something so be clam and stay safe from this novel stupid thing. lol and lol no logic ?
Ye Xiaochen unable to find a job after graduation returns home village, & gains a Heavenly Shenong Farm System which has Acres of green land, Immortal Spring, Heavenly produce & an No limit Warehouse. With this MC will become rich and successful.Any one whose lucky enough to eat his produced will be beautify & live longer.I'm absolutely jealous.?
I REALLY think that the reason for having so few votes its because the art of the cover, it gives the vibe of being too flowery, not eye catching enough? idk but with a longer synopsis and a better art cover it might RISE, I really hope so, I mean the translator and editor seems like they are very hard/working and it may be a shame for them to not be able to bring us this story that looks promising, I also think that they have put a LOT of effort on this project. This is my sincere opinion, I may be wrong though...
I thought its gonna be one of those novels with same pattern but Its not. This novel goes so far to give an in depth look about the system. System thats is not inorganic A.I. like the other novels. This novel provides much more detail and explains the connection of different people from "far away" places.
This is a nice novel! The story development is good as well as the characters'. I saw some grammatical error but it's okay, I still enjoy reading the story anyways. Great work, author!
Overall it looks to be a WoW clone with a some different take on things such as no Horde vs Alliance but same classes and a majority of the vanilla races. It doesn't really detract from the story the game elements are solid, it is overall a decent read.I am not really engaged with the moments when he is out of game it mainly just revolves around his cat and minor life things.The character has been really fleshed out despite 30 chapters, I would like to see some character depth as at the moment he doesn't have any real defining traits.Honestly not sure what the author is building this story it reads a bit like a slice of life as the power ramping of some VR novels isn't really here that much. I guess that is probably the direction the story is going since the premise of his character is halos/buffs so he is relatively passive.
this a bit bland but the concept is refreshing just like isekai anime
Old Gamer Moments and new Charm in one with Humor. Great Story so far! I believe i speak for everyone pls More . And ty for the writing quality
Why tf is this in the voting section? If you were to pick dropped novels it should've been plague doctor, my exclusive dreamworld adventures, dawn of the new era or why do i suck at cultivation. Not this measly crap of a novel.
First off, I really appreciate the high quality translation done on this novel! I like being able to seemlessly read through the novel without wondering about grammar mistakes or seeing excessive translation notes that interrupt the flow of the novel. The novel started off differently than I expected and has been progressing quite well. There is a lot to wonder about in the novel, and I’m always excited about each new chapter. I’m pulled into the world created by the author and the plot that revolves around the main character. I look forward to each update on this novel!
Thank you for the novel. The story is good and I like the the army of undead. I think it can be the potential for this novel. I like it. Just keep updating... ?