Invisible dragon:actually i kno your scared keke stop bullshitting
This novel is amazing! The author can give us a clear image of an ancient era as well as action scenes. Moreover, I'm so impressed with the ml's action scenes because they're magnificent (There are many martial artist levels for him to break through). And because the ml is so hyper, he can wipe out enemies easily which is the scene that excites me a lot.
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Udon all.stand to there feet Udon blow's smoke and then wisppersthe smoke takes the form of the word perfect sheild a barrier forms around them. Yoru puts his hand on the almost invisible bubble like structure "Master why the shield?" looking at Ong run to Orion on the outside."There are some techniques that you must not preform on the inside of this room and that is one of them honestly I'm surprised not only that Ong was willing to teach it to him but he was able to preform it so soon without being able to actually practice it. Then the floor being to shake the hot liquid being to rise off the floor and diamond dust began to flow in the same direction as if it were being sucked in but once it got to the location it disappeared. Orion grabs his throat struggling to breathe and gets pushed to the side by On and falls to the ground.Ong performed the same move and then dust flowed freely and gold fell to the ground.Udon pokes the sheild with the piping and it popped like a bubble it took it's resemblance after to hear Ong giving Orion an hear full."What the hell were you thinking you trying to get yourself killed?"That was a great display of power!"Udon surprise Ong."But Master Udon.""Your student performed a technique that caused a blackhole I'm guessing you didn't tell him how to do it after all hehe..well it looks bigger then your first one after I helped train it to you." Orion bows to Udon."Thanks master." Udon turns to Yoru are you ready to see if you can match that spectacular display. Yoro walk up front giving Orion a high five as he walks past."Tag your it." Yoru set up twelve cups and then buckets of water above.takes his stance."begin!!
Ah. Honestly, I wasn't going to write a review at first because I directly understood that this novel wasn't going to be for me (I am not into romance). It would be like saying you dislike a horror book because it contains horror. That being said, the writing quality and the magic made me stay (I have an inkling toward mix of technology and magic). What a mistake I have made ?. I won't talk about the amount of sexual related talk that make you wonder if it's actually a magic novel since, again, it was clearly portrayed since the beginning and I knew what awaited me (I wasn't ready for the relationship with his cousin though, like what? Yes I know they are distant family but it's still family...) but the main character... THE MAIN CHARACTER. He discovers he has a magi inheritance in a world where magi are being killed or worse. Yet, the MC shows little to no concerns. You know, I understand that he was forced to follow the rule of the witches. But bro, you could at least show some concern ? You could not instantly trust whoever comes by ? Have some plans ? I am sure he will (I have dropped) but right now, he hasn't shown any... like how ? Also, why is the MC accepting to be used as a battery without any afterthought? Its as if it was the best thing to be a human battery... HOW ?! And then he became a familiar... A FAMILIAR ?! And the worst ? He doesn't show any concerns about becoming a familiar, not even an afterthought. What human being, and I say that in general, would suddenly become a slave and show absolutely no concern? Not even a little bit angry ? Just after he learns that familiars have to sleep with their master. It seems so forced... Like bro, enough, dropped. I am not a romance guy but the very least I know is that romance doesn't imply that the MC is dumb and incoherent.
positives: -cute-acceptable sadness and melancholy-the numbers are correct enough in regards to themselves and the story that i did not notice anything wrong -author seems smart-cute againnegatives:-liu shu sleeps/is out of commission and story too often-too much focus on side? characters (these two are different complaints)-fate/luck are prominent in the story
You know what's Funny and weird, this book has 4-5 Stars and no Negative Reviews lol
Thk for the chapter. Pls update more chapter!! Cant wait to read next chapter....................................................................................................
I LOVE this, I think it’s great, and cool of you to continue the story that you love. (Even if it couldn’t be finished)Definitely A To Go Book if you Need more of the Harry Potter World, or vampires.I would like for this to continue, and it will definitely be One of my favorites.Specially since i love the Harry Potter world!!
Hello everyone, author here, finally writing a self-review to promote my novel.This is my first book, and I must say I am finding it more and more fun to write and make the stories in my heard and in my life that I have experienced either through myself or through the people that surround me come alive for you.I always wanted to write a book like Haruki Murakami - a very realistic yet at the same time tackling some profoundly deep psychological issues, problems in relationships etc. There are so many messages that I am trying to convey through this book to the readers and I thought what's the better way of doing that than writing something inspired from my own very life.I am very humbled by the response and will continue to be stable and steady with my writing.I also want to apologize to the readers again for not being able to write more than 3 chapters per week. I am a teenager and I have a lot of other things to do, plus writing and editing alone take around 3 to 4 hours of my time. Not only that, I have to plan out the story in advance so that the novel remains consistent or get better as it progresses, develop backstories and stuff so that I have an idea on where I am taking my characters to. I don't want to lose focus on any character at all. All of them deserve focus and a role to play in the story, even if it's a minor role.
I took step to read this novel for it's title, when i started reading story i am involved in it. amazing start. ??i hope rest of novel will be amazing..
I refrain myself from reading horror story but this author has created the story in such a way that one will feel quite excited reading it. While reading the chapter it felt like that I should read more to know what is inside the story. Apart from it, the story appeared to me quite mysterious. Update more, dear author. You are going good.