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Starts off very promising and very good and then degenerates into complete illogic with MC playing passive observer and just going along and not questioning anything and even agreeing with those who try to kill him! Really disappointing especially after it started SO well.MC also turns from guy who saved another life into guy who doesn't care if attempted murder is made on him since its 'school policy' and he is fine with it.
Excellent. Everything about this book is just that. Excellent. All that needs to be said.
I just caught up with the latest chapter and all I can say is ~~~ This is wonderful ~~~ ! I don't care about the grammar whatsoever. The story is really great and feels so real! The conversation between each character is almost like how I communicate with people every day. I don't see anything forced. Action scene is fantastic .The story building, plot, arc, and the planning of the MC is fantastic and such an eye opener for me. It is unique from the rest of the stories with this kind of theme, so thank you to the author for recommending this work on facebook. I'll continue showing support as long as you make this story interesting. Keep up the good work!
I just read to the currently last accessible chapter with fast passes (chapter 170). It is noticeable that the author is an amateur author. But not in a bad way. Most things are top notch. It's just that things are not always fleshed out like in the stories of the really good authors and some strategies are a bit linear, especially in the beginning. But generally speaking this is a great story, playing in a great setting and the characters are better than anything I could write. Also the author respond to some comments. That's always a plus.
Nah I didn't like it It's kind of strange the stupidity of the protagonist even though he proclaims himself to be smart and he said he was a gamer but he doesn't act like someone who has a brain not to mention that the writing is kind of confusing since you can't understand when it's a thought and when it's a speech and also the protagonist talks while fighting so you lose a sense of time just like when you're having movement in fights it's hard to understand what they're doing as you mention some things that happened in the fight after the action was done
First time read Novel Video games and it's soooo good, all are added well, even the character design and the story development. Ganbatte author!!!
really good. here at chap 93. Just like the synopsis, more building or creating than gaming. Still thoutoughly enjoyed it.
Pretty go I recommend pretty good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good good
It's good, it's nice, it's fantastic, it's amazing, it's great! It's exciting, probably, it's excellent, it's breathtaking, very much want to read. I'M SERIOUS!
You should remove it from "Original" this is a cheap and bad copy of Douluo Dalu You should remove it from "Original" this is a cheap and bad copy of Douluo Dalu
Unbelievable boring ?. Maybe after 2000 chapters it will be more ok. 140 characters mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm mmmmmmmmmmm