Haihhh i think the budget was not enough to support this novel. The author end it with a bullshit ending... For others who found this novel, dont expect much from this novel as it was only a good time passer while waiting ur fav novel updated. This novel had a system setting that help him develop his intellectual and the system had store for the MC to buy the technology.. so this is generic tech system support that made MC the all knowing person who amaze the world with his invention... Its a good plot n there were not much of face-slapping scene.. The only downside of this novel was the author setting the novel in America, so we could see the great of America in this novel but, it was obvious that the author was chinese bcs u can see the expression n the acting of the character in this novel were too similar to any chinese novel out there... And i think thats maybe the reason this novel was dropped bcs the author couldnt get sponsor or credit from the great China bcs too much of America flattering.. maybe
It's only the beginning but your chapter 8 convinced me because it shows a possibility of reflection for the use of magic that I had not really considered before. I hope that the side full of thoughtful thought and strategy will be introduced in more detail in your webnovel ;) I offer you my encouragement so don't disappoint us
it's a very jumbled mess. It seems like the ramblings of a person loosing their sanity. Keep up the good work.
Personally, I feel this novel is extremely good, the best thing I like about this story ?how the author merge between the game and the real life.?.you get to know the ins and outs, key characters and cause and effects of each events while going through the story. great job ?
I'm only 10 chapters in but as a German speaker I am so irritated by the German names that it ruins my experience.
I’m up to chapter 45 in the story and wanted to write a review.TL:DR4.5/10Characters, plot, powers and world building are all interesting, execution is terrible. Ruined the whole reading experianceThis is one of the least concrete stories I’ve read. The powers, world building, and plot are very very interesting. However, the execution was terrible. Timelines of events are so messy and jumbled up it makes it hard to read.The MC doesn’t even feel like the main character at all. Just when I’m getting invested to one character the POV swaps right away. The pacing just feels terrible. Everything feels too fast for no reason, it’s like the author keeps having a change of heart in what they want the story to be.Overall, it just gets harder to read. The plot holes keep adding up, or there’s no foundation for the story to build on.
Hello what's with these harsh and cold comments by Xiao Ming and our dear author in ch.163 makes this guy looks even....I don't know haha. Possibly, it might be a new trend, well it works out nice for me
The story make the reader feel how Higarashi is training about shu and so on. Based on the synopsis, I think it would be a sad story, but, of course, let the author cook. Dont forget to finish the last chapter
The best novel to read?The concept of science fiction is interesting. What will happened to the Rocky? Seema's character seems so amazing. What will Anna do with Rocky?
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It's always great to see more horror stories on Webnovel! These are a bit unusual, in a fresh way. The writing still has some ways to go, but I hope the author continues to improve and share their works!
Hi! This is kera, an editor of the international writing contest SWA II. I believe your book has great potential, so I invited you to join in a week ago. Please reply to me so I can discuss this with you in detail.