It would appear that no one has proof read this. It is rife with all kinds of errors. It's pretty ridiculous how many there are. It was painful to read the couple of chapters I did.
I cannot find the squeal, where can I find it?
This is a great book, hope you can do more of the super natural.
Nice keep it up it great am also a writer check mine
for all who want to read this it will start good but eventually it starts to get repetitive and boring mc basically thinks with his d*ck and the system should just be called "f*ck every girl you meet system"
summery of it mc gets isekai into dead ancestor then has to get system points to get his life span back then he discovers that if he f*cks strong women he will get lot of points and then proceeds to do so that's the rest of the story
The updated chapter are terrible, especially the pronouns, any chance it will be fixed ?
Ther is a other fan Harry novel out ther. I wode like to have the name please if you know it ??
my bad sir yapsalot
Intensity of romance guys??
Looks like this novel has been droppped
Its great that this was one of his first stories, but it doesn't excuse anything. my comment is a warning to those who love properly established stories with good sense AND to those who love dragons, as this book is about human supremacy and not a vengeful dragon who's looking to correct the world for how humans destroyed it.
I'm pretty much still around chop 400 something...but people's comment are making it real hard for me to continue, so I need a spoiler pls, what happened to Lith I mean his love life,power,who else died and solus