Mc wins no matter what
Ok here is another update ( currently half done )
Mc is still dumb with just a little character development and the only reason I'm still reading this is because of world because of world building it's amazing ?? and also side characters. Although some are just stupidly created but some have amazing story with them and a lot of character development was put into them ( if not for these side characters i would have already dropped it )
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Now for harem I'm not gonna talk about it i have already lost interest in that part it was so badly created ( half of his partners are there because they sold their body to MC for some reasons) some are still ok and have a little development but overall it's feel author forcefully made this harem thing
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You guys can read it but a warning that don't think too much since the amount of mistakes in it is just concerning. Everything changes with chapter you read something in a chapter but after 10 or 20 chapter it will become completely different
Oh boy, this novel... Let me just start by saying that it takes over 2000 chapters for the main plot to slightly start to develop. That in itself already tells you how the author writes, he basically keeps everything a "mystery", going so far as to sometimes keep what the *main character saw himself* as a "mystery" to the reader by not writing what he god d*mn saw.
I have too many bad things to write about the novel but I won't. Honestly, I won't because there's one thing that is good which is the combat, and the novel does get better after 1k or so because of wars — if you completely ignore that there should be the main plot somewhere.
Ok I will say one more bad thing: The romance is weird. The world is obviously polygamist, pretty much everyone has a bunch of wives, but the author writes every relationship and the characters thoughts with a monogamy view, which basically makes no sense.
I would still recommend if you can endure 1k chapters of extra garbage until it gets better.
They isn't much world building yet so it's, pretty low. The story is very interesting so far. I wonder who Joshua Preston really is or the seven figures. That were shown at the beginning
Good start, doesn't have many flaws in grammar and pacing is good as well. looking forward to it
Its been long. Anyone's here? (-_-!)
This story is going on well. I love how Nalina is growing well, at least she is learning how to fight back. This is a good start
Okay, Author here
I'll be leaving the first review on my book cause, why not?
Anyway, I'm a nervous wreck about this book and doing my best to make it work out to my own expectations, so if you have any questions and want to know anything, spoilers included, just post it on this comment and I will give you an answer in the next 12 hours.
Hope you like it, thank you and good luck in foodie town, hehe
Hey, shameless author here.
The first novel that I have written, but I really hope you guys will enjoy this
A big thanks to anyone that reads.
Ok so it turns really random at times. The main character will go for a little stroll only to engage in a battle to save the world. It gets weird, but after the third time im used to it.
I feel like korin lork is worse.
I feel like the mc has a hole in his brain, since this Qing Mei and Priest Corpse appear is clear they are mora dangerous than anything even the Yu dinasty is not as sinister as them, but he still no sure if he need to kill them ? what a retard, mind controling people who where never you enemy before is the most sinister thing possible