Although it's imaginative(?) and has a bunch of positive reviews(possible fabricated), the grammar is horrible and the story development is forced and unnatural. I really tried hard enjoying the first few dozen chapters but they are too short, unentertaining and it seems like it's written by a fourth grade student. It would take a skilled editor to really improve it to readership standards. Most of the paragraphs contain sentences that are mostly filler words, irrelevant exposition and runoff sentences. The chapters are extremely short, mediocre and has a substandard quality. In my opinion, this novel doesn't deserve any of the positive phrases in its reviews. I hope the author can improve its chapters and make it more palatable. Until then, I can only give this a low score to offset the other biased reviews here so future readers won't get scammed into reading this.
one of the first xianxia novels I ever read mostly via machine translation website when it was free. glad the booked even closer to a complete translation. I'm sure its as good as I remember it. a Harem novel that keeps its member working forward for a shared goal. it has its faults but its an entertaining classic webnovel.
It's so cool to see Terraria come to life in an adaptation like this. I've always thought about how cool it would be to see a story around the sufferings in Terraria and this does it pretty well.
Some parts of the story could be more fleshed out but it is entertaining nonetheless.
Worth reading.
Good
chars for char limit: (what is in my ctrl v)
la recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partiela recette écrite de partie
I don't usually write a review when the story is still in the beginning, but it made me want to follow. There are certain grammatical errors but nothing that gets in the way of reading and the plot is very well done, I want to read more so keep up the good work!
Hey there!
Good day for writing! If you wanted to see whether you can get paid by distributing the current work or getting financial support by writing new work, you might want to contact [email protected]. A brief introduction, some sample chapters or links will be appreciated when reaching out.
I wonder, How many chapter are all in this story? because I only ended in chapter 348, because I'm thinking to buy privilege, if it is really worth it?-is it more than 1000 chapters? I really like it alot :)-I hope it will have more chapters to come:)))))-THANK YOU WRITER-
need more need more need more. please . meed more nee more. this needs to be picked. need more need more please pick this one. very good. Please pick this one
Everything about the novel is good... but you destroy smut scenes either you write it right or you don't write it.. those who want to read them would not want to see mall and car and different stuff in there... i hope you will change it.. of you write it then write it right
So the author gave himself a 1 star?That's already enough for me to give him a 5 star rating!Word count requirements are annoying ,like really.
why do I feel that this book's storyline is not as good as the original.... felt disappointed when the original got cut. take lily for example, in the original book she has more life, compared to this one. I just hope that the books will later come to unity, becoming one whole book...author... you are doing well overall... looking forward to the updates...?? keep up the great work
Hey, Author..can you continue the story.. For ME, your novel is fun and amazing.. I hope you can update more and put some more romance and action in the plot ????