THAT Note in the synopsis reminds me of the popular saying "No man is an island", Too deep, made me realize just what it says every individual that thinks they're useless has yet to know or found itself's uses. FOR THAT I'LL GIVE 5 STAR, ALTHOUGH I'LL PROBABLY REDUCE A STAR OR SOME IF THE STORY ISN'T GOOD.
Nice grammar and everything else is all perfect, it's alluring and easily gets hooked up, I like its prologue and how the characters are introduced, good work author, and to many more interesting chapters.
I love this novel, it is a great read. However I would like to offer some feedback. It is a bit too slow almost 80 chapters and we still haven't seen much yet and almost no fights. I like the MC and the story but in my opinion you should speed up the plot a bit you don't have to do anything drastic but simply increase the speed a bit. Hope this helps❤
Great work on your book, can't wait to catch up to the latest chapters
Good idea of a dungeon in a cultivation,world ,i like it and decent execution, not many typos unlike my review but i dont like that the author makes stuff up that never happen, things are going super fast, the chapters are so short, i read 50 chapters in an hour, characters and background are ok decent read, but definitely not a top novel out there, ill probably finish using the free trial i like it but won't continue reading
Full attributes martial arts. it has the same mc and starting chaps. this novel is actually really good and enjoyable if its wctually this tho so heck yea
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this novel is absolutely amazing. i loved the bandit part of the story so much that i fell on the floor laughing. story is very well thought out and very well written. love this novel and would recommend everyone who likes fantasy and cultivation novels.
Clean and descriptive story telling. Cohesive sentences that flow super easily and compelling characters that give me a reason to be invested in the story. Translators and editors are really doing God's work by breaking the language barriers to great art.
Aaa, this story is so great I don't even know where to start. The whole thing is sweet and touching and packed full of lively, vibrant characters and intertwined stories. Once I started reading I ended up skipping the ongoing stories I read just so I could binge on this one. A fantastic piece of art!
I think this novel has something interesting... its been a long time since I read a novel with multiple leading characters and it's very good written.
Expectant about future development !
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