DaoistAR7uho
I kinda don't like the mc's character. he is full of himself like duh you just got the power of pain not the attitude you don't need to act like pain.its like his not himself anymore. his impersonating someone.HIS NOT PAIN!the first part of the chapter tells that he like reading and watching the MHA anime and that he was hit by Truck kun and then he got 3 wishes. like author you don't have to imitate /copy pain's attitude it's not Naruto world okay?it's MHA where you can't kill!except if he want to be a villain.
like yow the MC really think that he's god himself.
I like reading fanfic so much like I've got obsessed with it these days.
but its just I don't like the way the MC act.
How did you dropped this!!! Pick it back! How did you dropped this!!! Pick it back! How did you dropped this!!! Pick it back! How did you dropped this!!! Pick it back! How did you dropped this!!! Pick it back! How did you dropped this!!! Pick it back! How did you dropped this!!! Pick it back! How did you dropped this!!! Pick it back!
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The MC hasn't made any idiotic mistakes, the plot flows smoothly, and the side characters are pretty interesting (especially the gamers).
I think this story has potential.
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sem duvidas essa deve ser possivelmente uma das mais divertidas historias de vr, parabéns, quero muita liberação rápida................................
Argh, I feel like this story was written by parents to make learning fun child. I could not make it through the first chapter. The novel so far is very very boring!
There's no shapeshifting.
This is actually a story of a male protagonist's every action being praised and revered by a group of rabid female fans. The rabid fans take his every word as gospel. They organise lynch mobs against anyone who dares talk ill of the protagonist. And of course, all the fans are incredibly beautiful, from powerful backgrounds, or have something else about that that's incredible.
Surely there's other ways of stroking one's ego than reading this. This author must have a massive inferiority complex.
I really didn't think I would be hooked to a novel with silly sounding name. Now I'm looking forward to the future of this story. If you're cultured like me, not minding keeping the bloodline pure, surely you would like it.
so it finally got a translation. its is a good one i tell you.......................................jshsbshsnabnsndjsndbdnnsmsndjdnsmskdnskandn
Near chap 50 60 the story become unbelievable. The characters are weird, interaction weirder, everyone in this world is a arrogant - backstaber - young master - dumb grunt - idiot (chose some and mix them you have 99% of the character).
And this make the story go bad. The idea of the shop is good but the story dev and charac dev are ruining it.
Its honestly tiring to read again and again and again about Im X and Im gonna trash your shop. Oh no I get beaten. Lets call Y and he will trash your shop loop.
Plus there is no law system at all it seems ? You can kill people and and be fine with that. Its a bit weird in modern settings, and it doesnt help with the story here because of the huge ammount of murderer/criminal in the world (all except the mc sister so far, so about 99.9%, even if we could say mc is kind of justified)
The writing is average. Not bad, not exceptional.
Anyways im disapointed in the story. I can t keep reading it.
