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The characters don’t fully act in accordance to their age. And as a result can be a little annoying and pulls me out of the immersion. This is really the biggest reasons I drop novels beside edge lords. Nothing horrible about the book nothing to amazing. It’s just alright for me but could be someone else’s cup of tea.
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You should keep it up. It is a good story plot. A deviation from the normal story lines of web novels and xianxia stories. I am waiting for the next chapters.
Ah yes, isekai into the creator's own game.The grammar and characters have been fleshed out nicely. Your sentence structures are for the most part great! The breaking of the 4th wall is a nice twist and its not abused too which is good. The only problem I have is the plot. What's Jason and Mo Zuo's end goals? This is his game so he knows everything about it, but what is his purpose? This could very well be explained later, but I just recommend making it clear near the beginning chapters!
A bit shameless writing a review on my own novel. I do hope you guys do the same and enjoy reading my novel as much as I'm enjoying writing it.
But original showbiz is rare as most are translation and there are many romance novel.Anyway i don't blame you good luck in this work,i'm still supporting! ?
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I really like how the author portrayed the main character. Personality wise, he’s not the most likeable person. His character reeks of arrogance and immaturity, but I’m pretty interested to see how he develops as the story progresses. The flow of the story is smooth. The story is written with excellence with barely any grammatical mistakes, which I find common in many other online novels.Overall, this book keeps you captivated, and I highly recommend it to others.Ps, I found out about this book, through the author’s other novel: Undercover Superstar: A Song of Pyros & Snowflakes, which I suggest others to check out as well!
Hi! I really enjoyed reading this, you got me hooked from reading your first chapter. The characters were precisely described I am amazed~ Though I feel you were inspired by different movies compiled to one and you delivered it perfectly, Keep updating I'll be waiting for more!