Just a Little Complicated

This is a story about a MC who wants to be a "King of Soldiers" but seems to know nothing about becoming a soldier. Everything about training to become a soldier seems to be surprising to the characters. If you know nothing about a soldiers training or have never read about the military you might enjoy this. It makes me think of a JP high school LN but it's a military academy instead. Not for me.

This is a treasure I found while randomly browsing the platform. If you like harem novels and MC-centric novels, read it now. My only complaint is that the romance doesn't develop much. Events unfold very quickly.

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Ah yes, isekai into the creator's own game.The grammar and characters have been fleshed out nicely. Your sentence structures are for the most part great! The breaking of the 4th wall is a nice twist and its not abused too which is good. The only problem I have is the plot. What's Jason and Mo Zuo's end goals? This is his game so he knows everything about it, but what is his purpose? This could very well be explained later, but I just recommend making it clear near the beginning chapters!