This story is just cliche. That's all that really needs to be said, but I'll go on...Cliche list:MC treated like trash,anything you want and more system,max talent MC,MC has no intelligence (despite what is claimed),MC complains all the time despite not having to work as hard as any other person for his power (was complaining about working for months yet others have worked their entire lives),auction scene (not as cliche as others as he was selling but very cliche),alchemy (anything MC makes with his alchemy is better than what anyone else made and he obviously progresses as much in two months as others do in years),fiance (I don't even need to explain this one),family problems (one of the big families but is the declining one that has been teamed up on by the others).I could go on but you get the point. Not necessarily a bad novel but just one that essentially seems like a list of cliche rather than an original story.
ughhhh where did all the chapters go? i cant find them anywhere and what is going to happen now since the chapters disappearedi was reading the story and when i went to go the next chapter it said oops its broken.
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Love this novel. Good story with a unique plot. It adds a twist to the apocalypse genre of novels. The characters aren’t boring to read and that’s all. Now enjoy my poem.Roses are red.Violets are blue.Clovers are green.White clouds are—white.And the sun—it’s beautiful. Oh I messed up.And the sun—it’s yellow. Orange. Red. What color is the sun?FUUUUCCCCCKKKK
I cried, why? Because that writing quality rivals a popular novel. The mc personality is kinda bland but he can get some improvement, the story has a nice past and the world is decently well done, also the fights are explained well... Since I mostly do 1st view I cant really explain how it actually looks but have to see what the character would think.
Writing a 2nd review in hopes of seeing a response from the author. The story is amazing. It is absolutely the best story I have read on this site. Unfortunately, it has not been updated in 2-3 months. I still check in every few days to see its status, however. I do hope the author is doing well and it is not a health issue causing the delay. Is there any update on the status of this story? Even hearing there was a loss in motivation to continue it would be a welcome, though disappointing, revelation. Sincerely, Avid fan.
i keep searching for good business novels but it's so hard to find, and then I found you, my beloved author-kun ?????????????????
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A little bit confusing at the beginning because of lack of emotions but we'll it gets better in later chapter. Last chapter gave me a boner. SPARTA !!!
I'm genuinely surprised by the amount of positive reviews for this novel. The entire story so far has been almost entirely a copy + paste of the popular MMORPG, World of Warcraft. If this isn't blatant copyright infringement, I don't know what is. In addition, even if the reader has no clue what World of Warcraft is, no less the lore of the game, the way that the story is presented in this novel is horrible. Random names and events are given throughout the novel, and they are in no way actually explained, leaving the reader clueless as to what they are actually reading. I've read through the reviews here, and one guy even said that the world building was amazing. What? There is literally no world building at all. It's as if the author just took events and character names from World of Warcraft and inserted them randomly into their novel. All in all, this novel shows a complete lack of imagination from the author.