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there was a lack of trying in this novel. I could tell what was going on half the time because the novel was skip from place to place like when did he learn how to use the system or what it even does it do for a matter of fact to me it seems that at the end of the chapter there was I whole chapter in between. I like the idea but the lack of work makes the novel bad even if you translate it at least look over it and fill it the blacks. This novel is a good idea but has no work put into it.
It's an insult to editors to claim that this tl has been edited.
honestly I like the jokes in this novel like it's good you should add some more comedy things (i will support ya as much as I can)
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a great fan fic, a very interesting point of understanding that the author gives, if anyone knows if there is a continuation and where can I read it.
I love this novel but my one complaint is that I'm not sure if he dropped it or not because there's been no update in 2 months.
Overall this is a very enjoyable story, well written besides an error here or there, but those are ignorable, with a very interesting main character who becomes more likable over time, some interesting love interest, and a dash of mystery that’s fun to think about. I think this is a story you should definitely give a try, you might have fun with it to be sure, but make sure to read the auxiliary chapter to avoid any momentary confusion.
I'm already hooked I can't wait to see where this goes it's an Orginal novel that has gained inspiration from Avatar the Last Airbender I believe and become this VR game. I have high hopes for this and hope this can be released a lot.
Bagus sih ceritanya tapi tolong translite tin dong soalnya msh ada kata2 yg saya krang faham mungkin klo di transleit ke bahs indonesa saya lebih faham hehehe... Itu sja sih makasih
Review: so many good novels have come out recently. makes me upset this one doesnt have 1000 chapters so i can binge.This novel from start to 168 has been astonishingly good. From characters to enemies and world background even thought process has been top tier quality. the last time i reviewed a vrmmorpg this good it was cultivation online and i wholly believe this novel will surpass it. Based on current chapters i give this a 10/10 which i have rarely ever given. I recommend everyone to give this novel a chance and cant wait to see where this novel leads.
