Need stability. But almost perfect keep going and write more.?? Keep the imagination and literature going strong. Hopefully you will make one where a King settles down with
Good start-up story, but as it progresses, i find the MC quite dumb to the point of not even being to domineering -- a quality dragons possess innately. He easily submits to negotiations, suffers humiliation and let's grievances pass. And to think that he will be an 'INVINCIBLE DRAGON EMPEROR'...what a letdown.
Boring. It's just another simulation novel. The twist isn't even a twist at all. Effectively, the MC's name is swapped with someone else in the simulation. Just another power up fic.
I would recommend
boringnot interested in reading any longer after x pages of: 10 damage * 0.3 - 4 damage bla bla bla
Your writing is beautiful.I look forward to your writing.I wish I could write like you.You write how I feel, even if I can’t express it.Your writing inspires me.I falling in love with your novel,i hope can read it everytime,i hope you writing this novel to the end and goodjob and thank you for your hardworking to finishing all chapter.....
This is one of the most underrated novel I have seen on this site. This story has so much potential, I can't read enough of this book. It combines some of the best ideas. I think this has the quality of a very good translated book. A author should of done a novel like this a long time ago. I hope the author adds multiple realms, and I hope the author makes this novel a 1000+ chapters. (I think the authors name is one of the best, and one of the most funny name on the site.)
I really like the story and I was excited about the main character actually telling someone the truth in the beginning but I can't read it anymore because of the non stop descriptions on everything. It's like you went and found every word you could to describe one single thing every paragraph. Sometimes it gets so bad you take up a whole chapter. If you could dial it down then I think you have something here.
-Trully, underated.- Hidden gem-Spoiler....ish ? -no storyline spoiler tough-Ø read at your own discretion-○The concept of the story is amazing, and the protagonist is not bound to just one set of abilities.○The reason of reincarnation is justified. (Explained)○The historical facts are interesting, good, and not anoying (as there is no overflow of info either) - ○Relatable MC (extra-super bonus point)○Halfish.. korean-chinise style of writing... ? Idk-just me ○Almost to none-to no brain dead f•ing 'young master'type-people○Reliable update speed (1/day)○No iritating plot armor○System/halfish system story
Amazing story! The best I've ever read. Writing quality- Amazing. Barely any grammatical errors. It's easy to read and understand. There's nothing I can complain about.Stability of updates- I recently just read this so I can't say much. But the author is on a hiatus(I think) so I'll just give it 5 stars.Story development- 5/5 again. The story moves along nice. It has the perfect pace and it doesn't skip over anything. Author explains the different plots very well and doesn't leave anything unanswered.Character design- 5/5 but if I could I'd rate it even higher. I've never been more attached to fictional characters in my life. Side characters are amazing they all grow. Jeremy, Jakes brother, is one of my favorites. I started off hating the guy but by the end, it made me wish for a brother like him. The way he grew and interacts with Jake is simply perfection. Don't get me started on the main family. Noah, the twins, Zeke, and the parents are all written beautifully. Finally, the main character, Jake. He grew so much throughout the story. From not interacting with anyone and being scared of people to going to a boy who's able to freely talk to people(albeit not perfectly) was amazing to watch. He's still not perfect and is still far from being 'normal', he grew a lot. But hey, who really is normal? Everyone has their quirks. And that's one thing this story is amazing at showing. World Background- Good. 5/5 for me. Other- Author if you're reading this, I want you to know how much I love this story. I would love for you to come back as soon as possible to continue this story, but I know you probably have things going on in life. I just wanted to let you know that this hands down is the best novel on this app.
i like the beginning...i like where this is going with the vampires and everything...but i only have 1 request author...pls dont nerf rudra in this book...just to make max look good....he was an op main character and i hope he will still remain the same later in this book...max obviously will be op too...there is nothing wrong with having 2 op characters by the end of this series
I don’t know but I don’t trust VO, like I sense that she’s like the final boss to fight before you get to the next level. Also can we just get a book for Tar and Dusty already. They’re so cute. But Kat is in for it. VO doesn’t seem she’s letting Aiden go anytime soon.