It's a story with potential. The pirates theme is very interesting and not something very explored. It's nice to see someone telling a story like that.Despite this, I believe that the author needed to make readers know the protagonist more. He spent many chapters explaining and showing the prison break and when he barely starts to show the mc path, his choices and personality construction... Locked Chapter. Most of what I saw was tragedy after tragedy happening in Shiro's life. For me, it needs more for people to decide whether or not to continue reading the story. Not much to say based on the free chapters. It just has a lot of potential. The world, the monsters, gods, powers, history... All of this can be very good but you couldn't see it in the 34 free chapters.I wish the author success on this journey. I hope you do a good job. Peace!
mC sangat idiot super.Sikap yang kekanak - kanakanBerkata kalau novel favoritnya adalah wuxia atau xianxia, tetapi dia sendiri hampir tidak tahu semua yang berhubungan dengan wuxia.Dan seiring berjalannya chapter, mc semakin bertambah idiot dan selalu terkejut, terkejut.Astaga !!Kalau authornya ada di samping gue, gue bakalan getokin tu kepala Author, sudah membuat Mc super idiot.
It's a good storyUpdate more.
It´s an interesting and fun story that catches the reader off guard. I enjoyed the twists and turns the arc offers. Just when you think you know what might happen next, the author tends to surprise you with vivid details that keep you wanting more.
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Real going well. Thx for every one support please guy read it rate me so i can know how much better i am if u like it give a powe stone. Otherwise just like and cmmnts for any improvement
This was a new read for me, this was an extraordinary and wonderful novel. The vocabulary and writing proficiency was supremely promising from the author. keep it up!
Please pick this novel up already! I'm dying from withdrawal!! I NEED TO KNOW MORE! THERES SO MANY QUESTIONS UNANSWERED! I haven't been this hype about any novel on here in a VERY long time.
How Do I Begin? I have no idea.Anyway, this will be a harem novel with powers. The apocalypse stuff happened long ago but it has a lot of influence on the plot a little later on. I'll update this daily but as I'm more focused on my main novel Dawn- an age of darkness, things might be slower. And this is my first time writing in this genre so if anything strikes you funny, do let me know. Do give me all your power stones and hopefully I'll win.
albeit similar to the elf queen tavern except its a king who is in disguise, listens to the mc instead. Overall its a wholesome story, could've done without the system though cuz it is a little bit out of place when the mc knew much already of the history. the system isn't needed at all but take my words as a grain of salt. Very fun to read, its been a while ive read a relaxing novel. ?
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