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wow, what an amazing story, I love how you describe everything....I was hooked at the first chapter. keep up the good work author.❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤
Nice...finally found a story that could potentially be one of the greats on this app. I was reading chapters here or there and boring!!!! Lol???? but i think this will be a great and interesting read that ill become hooked for sssuuuuuuuurrrrreeeeeeee??????The summary makes it entertaining...maybe????the reviews are also significantly all good. I've gotta read for sure!!!! ❤❤❤
This story is quite a blast to read! It’s fun and erotic at the same time! It’s one of those stories that get you going and even has a developing relationship inside of it. I would say that as a novel it is quite good and gives you the overall suspense and feeling you want. It’s a all in all great novel and is carefully written out with little to no mistakes in writing which leads to better enjoyment during reading.One minor quirk I have is the author does take a very long time to post a new chapter. Just be patient is all I can really say I guess.TLDR: It’s a great novel, 100% should read, although updates take a long time.
the story is rather interesting, it has some ups and downs in the writing, but the character development and the mentioned release times, i look forward on the progression on the main character how how he turns out, also looking forward to see what he gets at the rebirth realm, hehehe
Idea is great. but authir has not done a good job potraying it.Too much random stuff and veRy unnatural. lots of things seem very hapazardLy put together because the author has a thought.Very stupid things happen which is very unecessary. and soo much that can be done is not done.Please wrote down a defLtails of an arc and then start writiNg chapters. not whatever one feels like At the moment.
literal trash. retard character, no worldbuildin. literally finds a ring in the dirt that has reality bending powers, that just happens to be linked to his game. this is fucking trash. don't read it, total waste of time.
Not having any good novel to read I came and check out the 'decent' novels to kill time....Browsing through the reviews to get some constructive info to see whether is worth adding to my librarySeeing all those blind 5 star ratings just kill my mood to read it again....This novel while is definitely not good it have a charm of its own.But all these BS 5 star ratings making many readers filled with expectations then realised that they were cheated.It makes their reading experience a horrible one.Congrats to them, cuz I wont be touching this novel any more as they basically ruined the reading experience without actually reading the novel..
I’m giving them all a 5 because you executed them perfectly. honestly, world background, and character design deserved more than a 5!!!I loved how descriotive it was, it flowed easily and I felt like I was standing right there. I’m also a fan of an epic plot, and I can’t wait to see how this story will end!!! Greak work!!!!!!!!
Is it just me or has this been in queue for a while? it's kinda annoying....................................................................
pretty good novel so far. the overall idea of the story is executed nicely without being written like the typical cultivation novel. maybe the pace of a story is a tad bit slow, but if you could keep regular updates (maybe daily?) i can see this novel have great success, or maybe this last part of the pace and updates can just be my wishful thinking and overall preference. anyway keep up the good work and hope to see more
Its a good story and very good to chill with, if u want something to chill after doing a serious reading session I would highly recommend this.