It’s alright... I just don’t like the harem collecting that seems to be going on here and before you attack me, look I know it’s a comedy and it makes fun of it and well yes I did laugh but to me it’s kinda meh to be honest in terms of story plotting. I just don’t like where it’s going and to me at least a far superior comedy cultivation novel would be the likes of I might be a fake cultivator and the cultivation chat group which both have quite the interesting characters and well of course even more amazing comedy. So yeah that’s my opinion here and my review thanks for reading.
Okay first things first, don’t stop at 10 chapters, read to 20.The MC is like an arrogant young master with all the perks and beyond; who doesn’t like an OP MC?Next, the MC is aware of his role in this story. To literally be the young master that beats down lead characters of their own stories except this time, the lead characters have no hopes of getting revenge.Think of History’s Strongest Senior Brother.Yeah that but this MC isn’t just strong like the MC in HSSB. He’s downright overpowered. Cheat from a system, from a background that can feed him unlimited resources, a cheat with godly talent. And... a cheat that lets him steal powers from those “MCs”There is a harem and the MC is only tolerable but at least he isn’t a self-righteous hypocrite like other basic cultivation MCs.Good read, honestly.
Definitely the type of novel I would read.Grammar has little to no errors. Prose and narration are fluid, descriptions are conveyed with intricate details. Dialogue is good also. Nothing much I could really critique. Definitely one of the gems here at WN. Keep up the good work.
So lengthy to read and absolutely fcuking boring. The story premise is good, but the added extra details are very lengthy that make you feel like reading same business news from different magazines one after another without gap.
I would say that this has potential but to the author maybe write longer chapters if possible and try to go mor in depth with the mc‘s personality and how he acts and I would love to see where you can take this story so keep it up -love you from Salty/Nocito/Atreeus ♥️