Liked the story my brother, keep on doing the good work and really nice suggestion you gave me on channel loved itRegards Mohakejd
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I like the story and the plot is great. A lot of new character that has interesting personality! Good writing style! Do keep updating when you're free! Keep it up dude~
Mostly for XP, but while I am here:1.I like the main character2.I like the side characters3.The grammar isn't too bad (some errors, but not nearly as bad as I have seen around this website)4.The story is pretty good so far (I am only about 40 chapters in though).Overall, I would say it is worth a shot if you don't hate system stories (or isekai)
⛔REVIEW: Currently at 500+ chapter⛔*This is why many says this novel is NTR: The MC has 4 friends in the academy named Kyle, Lisa & Helia. Kyle likes Helia but Helia likes the MC. After some events Helia & MC became a couple and married while Kyle was heartbroken but tried to be happy by doing playboy sh*ts. After some chapter, the MC goes leads wars and stuff while never having for time for his wife, Helia. Kyle sees how pitiful Helia but does nothing due to being bff with MC.While leading war MC is poisoned and only has months to live. MC thought he would die so he distanced himself from his wifey, Helia. Plot armor happened and MC learned how and where to find the cure of the poison. While finding cure, MC was seduced by another woman and they had s*x.On the other hand, Helia is managing the MC's land and having a hard time and her father died. Kyle sees how pitiful Helia is and seduced her. Helia gives in and they kissed and flirted.MC comes home cured and learns about the affair from his spy. MC just waited Helia to choose between him and Kyle because MC is feeling guilty that he f*cked another girl.Helia ended things with Kyle and chose MC because she learned she is pregnant with MC's child.*If you like Tales of Reincarnated Lord, you will love this novel.⛔Highly recommended
Doesn't seem much special, but okk let's see how it goes .
I like it? Nono I love it? YesssI adore it? Of courseeeeeThe story the development the difference girls and boys in the story everything
here's my review for the first 46 chapters..Writing quality is pretty good. there are some mistakes here and there. usually it's like a "we're" written as "were" or something similar.For updates.. well i actually binge read these chapters but it seems like there is 2 chapters in a weak release time and for such a good and interesting novel it feels too slow.. personally i would like 1 chapter every day but if author has other things in life so he/she can't do such speed then it's understandable.Story development is good.. it's quite fast, not too fast. there are almost no cliche monents and no useless filler like some novels where a whole chaptee could be just others reactions at mc faceslapping everyone and showing how awesome they are. I like that mc is going towards rune and array dao and not alchemy. I hope there will be specific explanations to how runes work and how they correlate to math and sciense and explanations to what qi is and other things..Mc is very relatable.. indeed like the synopsis says his actions are more human like.. they are logical and other characters are like that too.. I don't like some characters personalities but there are no very arrogant stupid characters so far, all named characters have character growth.. well some may look pretty dull but maybe there will be more known later about them and their stories. I personally feel like if i was cultivator i would be very similar to mc.Also i hope that there will not be romance.. I know that girl.. was her name yimu.. anyway she has feelings toward mc.. but we have to understand first that they are soon only 11 years old.. they are just kids so no need to create romance at that age, also we have already seen killings which is pretty disturbing when thinking they are 10 year old.But also mc really feels like he should fully focus on cultivation.(array dao is also cultivation) Mc has his big goal to explore the universe and search more knowledge about the universe and cultivation and qi. It is basically the most important plotpoint and kind of also plotarmor that mc will in one way or another become the strongest cultivator.. even if it's his pure talent towards cultivation and comprehension talent or he gains some lucky chances to inheritance or similar etc. And If mc has a wife in the future she would have to have similar talent so she can live forever too or mc would have to reincarnate her.. which would all be too cliche.. All kinds of plots have already been used where mc has a wife who is a daughter of a big clan or something like that. and she has special body and will be taken away from mc in one way or another. also to have a wife constantly in the story being basically main character too wouldn't really fit this story.so.. whew.. in conclusion rather have friends but no romance and have mc going towards the peak of cultivation and let us follow as he explores and does research to runes and arrays and qi.For the world building.. we don't know much.. i like that it's not just the basic lower world, middle world and upper world type but actual universe and they live in a planet.. I guess we have to wait till he is 16 until the continental tournament arc to know more about the world. i guess there will be time skip before that because it took 46 chapters for 11 months from the beginning of the novel.. which isn't slow but if we think that about 50 chapters is 1 year then we have to wait for a very long time. If you have read all of my review then congrats ? that was 3560letters/characters
is this really is what the synopsis said?or is it another scam or will this downgrade later?said the mc thought the skill to other humans but I think it is only to fellow Chinese lol
Something a bit different. Looking forward to it and hopefully it will be released past the voting period . ?????????❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤❤