This novel has an interesting beginning. I enjoy how the author set up the main character and how he gains power. I would recommend this book for sure. Only the writing needs a bit of tweaking for this to become a hit.
to someone saying this boring? for me this is a good novel ?❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️??????????❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️
Hurm, 3.6 star from me. I'm going for lower, but it may make you feel depressed...My opinion is nearly the same as Elder, the one who review before me... The story actually bordering average and boring at start, but after a few chapter it get trash fast... I get it, you want to fvck as much as you want, get thousand harem member as fast as you can, but this is way too.... Hurm, how to say it without hurting you feeling?... A bit too.. Virgin-ish?...
As the author it is a given that I will give myself a good review.This may be my first work but I have some great ideas for this story, though it might take some time for me to get there.I hope you will enjoy my own version of an apocalypse story as much as I will writing it.
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The story lack in the category; however, I can't seem to drop it. All the jokes and puns are so bad that they are good. I find the story to be extremely amusing. The biggest problem that I face right now is the romance aspect. Especially with the formation of the harem. I think the story should focus more on the idiot antics of the protagonist. Overall, I really like this book and hope it can be improved. From Your Fellow Reader, The Hermit
stable updates with only information type system alone and no apparent harem.So go ahead and provide more updates140140140140140104104010401401401401401491401041401r9q1401401401401401491401491401401491401491401401r0140140149140
I’m only on chapter 108 as of now,but so far it’s been pretty well written and all of that. The characters are interesting and it feels like everyone has their own motivations ect and the MC is exactly as the author described in the synopsis. All in all it’s a good story so far,I think it has the potential to go on for a long time,I just hope it doesnt get dropped or something? Ight I’m outie✌️
Let’s begin with the good things. The updates are frequent, the grammar is normally good, the world is developed little by little and the plot advances at a decent rate. The vr idea although not new is good and I always enjoy this novels.Bad parts now. Since I just reached chapter 60, I will mention something that has been bothering me. He was a gamer, and it is the 3rd time he finds a big boss. HOW can he still not know about the bosses reaction at 10% health? It makes no sense, and if the intention is to give interest to the fight it not only not works. It makes it quite worse. Sometimes the author repeats a fact three times in the same chapter for three chapters straight. The reminder is welcomed once if this has been mentioned a long time ago. If not it just seems filler for word count. This may be personal, but naming the world he was before (coma) as fantasy world makes it a bit confusing since the game is a fantasy world. I understand it may be part of the plot, but just name it the other world. It solves in a simple way. Finally, I am not a fan of cliche characters. They have no development and are usually bland, with the same attitudes and personality. In this novel I can mention the fatty, the sister and maybe the teacher. That last one makes reactions that don’t make any sense and that’s why I’m not sure. (She has been his teacher for a while, and suddenly she falls in love with him. Her being a teacher that you described as kind but cold and responsible. It makes no sense and that kind of person will never act the way you are making her, sometimes a responsible teacher and the next time acting like a teenage girl with a crush).One more thing, as an advice, don’t make the main character dense on random occasions. I think nobody likes a stupid MC. He can’t be able to notice she is lying and then not notice she is blushing and clearly developing an interest in him. He has experienced 10 yeas in another world, so he should be used to interacting with woman. More so if he can even interact with nobels.I will keep reading it and see where it goes.
A good novel but the translation is not smooth.There are many terms that are changed(ex: nightmare mode <-->dream mode?!) and conjugation mistakes are common(ex: were instead of was) .
I just want to lower the rating a bit. I cringed a lot of times and I didn't even cross 20 chapters. I tried to bear with it but the cringing started to hurt so I can't read any further. I picked it for it's high rating, which is definitely exaggerated.
A new try by author in a different genre. A work well done with slight mysterious vibes. This story is about an average young men filled with hope and how he became someone he couldn't even hope to imagine.