TheDrunkencrater
To be honest, this novel is cliché but unique at the same time, I love it. Keep it up, just make this novel of higher quality than the wuxia generic in general. like reducing the "courting death" conversation of arrogant people everywhere, which I know is not much in this novel and that's one of the reasons Chinese novels are so annoying you know so much "courting death" and arogant people. just keep the quality of the story and keep the speed of updating, I'm sure this novel will boom soon if this novel has many chapters.
Apart from the simulation part, the novel is mediocre. The interactions are bland and it's not that fun. The simulation part and different situations are really interesting though.
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I love your writing style, It gives more life and emphasizes the story line even more. The Author thought of a very captivating concept that will definitely leave the readers hooked and wanting for more. Keep up the good work, Author! Kudos!
Applause! An inspired author with great imagination! Simple, straight forward and creative. If I may, here is just a suggestion, more dialogues to keep the story more interesting! :)
Very entertaining, and the pets are very cute. The gameplay and the lore behind the missions are okay. If anything, the comedic aspects of the story are A+ material. :)
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i think that with the mc statistics his battle power should be higher; he could fight against level 25 or + monster while on level 19 or 20.the novel has the harem tag but no much focus on it apparently I think I should focus on it a littleand the personality of the MC so far is great.**:i have a question?how is the appearance of mc? is he diabolically handsome or just a guy with medium appearance
This is a solid novel. The author takes an authentic approach to the characters discovery and understanding of the world. If not a little naive. I do have some hiccups with it though. In the first ten chapters the author seems to searching for the characters personality. Each new chapter the MC has a new outlook on life. When he is handing over the money he is confident, arrogance and vengeful but also caring and generous. The next chapter in game the character is a coward who flinches when someone gets near him. It doesn’t make sense, just cause he is LVL 1 does that mean he will cower and not give a simple letter to a drunkard. It felt forced and out of place of the story.
