Keep up the great work. This is a really great story keep it up. Please don't stop writing this story because I like it a lot..................................................................................
Automatic 5 stars for the title alone which tells me that this will be harem so basically five stars for the harem! ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)I haven't read a chapter yet but...Who cares! ( ͡°( ͡° ͜ʖ( ͡° ͜ʖ ͡°)ʖ ͡°) ͡°)
Story heavily uses dialogues to tell it's story, a style that I myself use while writing and quite interesting how you integrated past and present as the scene roll out. I liked the mystery surrounding the novel and I am excited to see how everything unfolds. I am thoroughly enjoying reading this and will be waiting on the upcoming chapters :)
Shameless author review here.It's my my first story. So there will be a lot of mistakes. I hope you will forgive me and and tell me where i did the mistake. It will be like a noobs writing but hope you will find the plot interesting. Here I tried something new with matching wrestling with system. I know my writing kinda sucks so you can curse at me but please do tell what i could add to make the story better.Well who am i Rambling to. I don't even have views ?
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this look like it's going to be pure chaos and i love chaos my understanding from your description is that an mental unstable person have a voice in his/she? head die for some reason now got a system too resulting in pure chaos lets hope I got it right
A slightly retarded MC in a boring story*********************************************************************************************************************************************************************
ntr? yuri? I hope not..... . .. .. ..
This novel is blood boiling. I want to make this as short and ****** as possible for I feel I could write a plethora of pages about this novel. It’s the closest Web Novel to reach the boundaries of an actual published book in that it uses many in-depth methods you would see in a great work of fiction. It has POV transitions. Where many web novels fail to give a perspective other than the protagonists, this novel does not fail and gives the reader the enjoyment of an interesting story with multiple facets to it. The world building in this novel ranks among the best I’ve ever seen of a web novel. It’s rich, inclusive to the plot, and so well written. I’m a personal fan of fictional histories and world building, and this novel hits all the spots. Perhaps most importantly is the cast of characters. The MC is a transmigration yet only has the benefit of some memories of his former graduate self. He is not powerful to the point that he impervious to threats and rather the opposite. I look forward to his growth, further use of his keen mind and eloquent verbal manipulation in dealing with the machinations that are pushing the kingdom to the precipice. And to accompany this protagonist and a great array of characters, fleshed out and interesting, helping and scheming against the protagonist. The villains in this are no slackers and defy the standard web novel villain that’s dumber than a stack of bricks. Of course, the great translation quality of this novel makes the novel just as much as the other factors. I’ve seen almost no errors in the translation and the structuring of the extensive word count that makes up a single chapter in this work is pleasing to say the least. It makes the story all the more wonderful to read. I’ll leave the story up to other reviews to spoil, but I say read it yourself. It isn’t fast, it’s paced more like a an actual novel rather than a web novel, but it will give a more enjoyable story overall. The 14 chapters a week release rate is enough to satisfy all but the most avid reader. I for one cannot get enough, but will endeavor to be patient.
I would commend you for your fast writing skills and uploading skills if you were the original author who actually wrote this novel, sadly instead you became a thief who like to use other peoples work as your own, also known as infringement. -1 rep
first 5 ch is just him getting home 5 freaking ch its ridiculous. this novel is obviously just a filler novel for the author to try and make money. ****kkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkkingggggg dumb