This is a good read so far wish it update more often but as long it does not get drop then it fine I guess. It was funny it see how the imp was slowly learning how to do things.
The story is pretty awesome and interesting up till know...I like how the protagonist is "very" strong in the beginning and has comparing material to one of the top beings on the "planet". I also like how the story is different from the "real" Harry Potter and gives a complete knew view of things and aspects. It is easy to read and most importantly: fun to read. I read the original so the hopes are quite hight. The story was easy to follow, but if one didn't read Harry Potter, some points might be not so easy to understand or they have just forgotten. Therefore I suggest that you, take over the author way by adding explanations. My biggest hope and wish is that you would write the story to the end and keep it interesting.
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It is actually pretty good so far. I liked the beginning far better than the grand duelist, another book made by the author. The premise is basically a demi-god or inhuman being who was the writer of fate in the future, dies and reincarnates. He is trying to reach the apex of what he once was. Or this is the premise of what I can tell.
This novel should have disclaimers for incredible amounts of gore and disturbing content. Obviously, the nature of any literary content is up to the author’s discretion! However, authors should still be responsible enough to put some disclaimers up when they publish such content so that a potential reader can decide for themselves if they want to to read such content. Simply, it should be a simple courtesy.*Disclaimer: Read up to chapter 16.*The plot has a steady pace and that pace is, in all honesty, slow. There are paragraphs that have “jumps of thought” where something is missing, making it difficult to follow. There are already plot holes being only at Chapter 16... Characters personally feel clunky. There are cases where the author is rather obviously using deus ex machina to fix even the simplest plot points; using them in nothing more than just basic human interactions, no less— there isnt even a weak excuse given for absurdity, its just.. there? I’m a naturally curious person who will hold on tightly to bad writing just to learn the plot, a character, some piece of world building, a slightly interesting take on a trope or what not... I want to know more about this world... but I personally won’t pursue reading it.These are my thoughts on this novel. It has more interest in creating scenes of gore and violent action than creating a story- and what I was looking for was the story.