English and Grammar is appropriate. Minimum errors on all current chapters which is good. As it does not have that much chapters, an appropriate review for plot, character, and world background would not be given. However, for a beginning, it would be overall be better than an good amount of works already.
Keep up the good work. Happy writing!
That world-building is amazing.
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A fast-paced story, you can take it slow.
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From the very beginning, the reader can feel that the author has a concept for the whole story! A big plus for that ;) The plot is intriguing.Well done, Author!
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World building is so good. Although there are some cliche parts it's still okay for me. Mc isn't winp. Worth reading
Hope to see what happen next this novel have a nice pace.When you start reading you only want to continue and hope it doesnt end.Hipe to see what will happen in the next few chapter!!
Man this world building is total mesh something he shows China superiority in earth ,that understable as novel is Chinese,but then he goes some random continent as well as as Thier is kingdom and nation ,the hell decide first whether it China or some random wuxia continent he mixed world with wuxia type as he is Chinese he try to show Chinese superiority but in next paragraph he goes back to some random nation I got totally confused
It’s all about the MC trying to make bad games and lose the system’s money.
However, it never works out because the games turn out good for various ressons and make a profit.
A lot of misunderstandings but it gets old really fast cause every arc is the same thing overall.
Characters are 2D with no personality, all they do is misunderstand how good of a game designer is.
It’s entertaining, just don’t binge read it if you don’t want to hate it.
dang it looks like Webnovel abandoned this one as well just like notebook of fortune a lot of good stories get dropped while a lot of bad ones keep going on forever
Damn they really should continue translating this story it really is a masterpiece that shouldn't be left like this like god a lot of great novels are just getting shoved to the side