Because so far it only has three chapters (at the time I read this), the plot is still unclear. I hope the author could develop more and answer the questions that might arise in readers.
Writing-wise, I see rooms for improvement. With more practice, you're good to go. Learn by reading other books as well to help you construct better words and nuances, how to describe certain things.
Best of luck dear author ✨ Don't ever give up!
I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up. I don't care ima get those ratings back up.
more chapter.the book is good with perfect idea
From what I read before the review, most of it is Gucci.
The writing quality is practically tip-top, aside from some slight typos. The paragraphs are well-aired. The flow is good.
It is updated daily, so that is a five-star right there.
As for the development and design part, it looks all good from where I stand :)
Keep this up author, you got this :)
Good. The villainess and mc are both very interesting to read ☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️☺️?☺️☺️☺️☺️
I like the novel but it feels like a plain white bread , if that makes sense , mainly the characters are missing something that will make them great, if that makes sense. The novel is good but it's missing some pieces that will make it great
It is good, in he starting it's just the pronunciation is the problem,Waiting for what will happen in the future chapters.
Expecting to be dropped.
Story is good, since this genre is his forte. But let me remind you, dont invest too much. Save your coin or fast pass, wait till 500 chptr.
Stockpiling first, since my heart still felt hurt when you decided to drop other novel. I know dont judge a person by his pass mistake. But you know, he can do it before, so it mean he can do it again.
Good luck and please finish what you have started.
I didn't have much expectations based on the theme, but it really proved me wrong. It was amazing and both character and story development is going at exactly correct pace. love it...
It started light then became incredible. Author's style of writing is good and I enjoyed reading the first ten chapters. I am hooked and will definitely read more.
Author pls keep writing and we readers hope to reach the end of the novel with you, pls keep in mind that there are still others anticipating for this novel and they just don't comment pretty much also,Thanks for your hardwork.
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The book is interesting... It plot is okay as well as the character.... The characters description is also vivid enough for one to be able to imagine the scenes that took place in it... So it deserves to be one of the best