good averall. wish there were more chapters in the book but yagh. other than that. good background and storyline. author if your reeding. please put more chapters.
I have no idea what this is. I just know its probably a master-disciple novel, and the MC will be old. That in itself already separates this novel from quite literally most anything on this website. That is why I want this to be chosen.
I actually like it. While it is not the most mentally challenging novel, it ain't braindead with countless plot armor devices that save the day. It has its plotholes and plot armor devices, but they are not overbearing. Just hope that it continues its pace and doesn't suddenly become a drastic overwhaul.
Not anything super special. A fairly regular beast taming story, but its decently well executed. Normally it would not be a 5 star (probably around 3.5-4), but it seems better than the rest from this trial read batch so I'll give it a 5 so that it hopefully wins
I would have never thought that I could find a novel this well articulated while simultaneously having a unique and original idea that surpasses my imagination. This is a precious gold bar in the (mostly) trash world that is Webnovel.
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BRO KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK OF WRITING THIS AWESOME NOVEL?,I WISH IF YOU COULD MAKE IT 7CHPS/WEEK IT WOULD HAVE BEEN GREAT AND IT WOULD ALSO BE GOOD IF YOU DONT DROP THIS NOVELNEW CHAPTERS PLEASEEEEEEEEEEEEE ??????????????????????
writing quality:4. not many problems and it is legible. Some editing would really help.stability of updates:5. very frequent. not much else to say here.story development:5. story is developing. fast. very fast. mainly due to the insane leveling speed of the main character that there needs to be a fast plot development.character design:2. main character is bland. side characters are bland. every person seems bland. All that is known is a not very ugly guy grinding in insanely fast speed because he knows things due to reincarnation and that he isolates himself.world background:2. not enough details that would explain the world. It is one thing to neglect the real world as the main focus is the game but to neglect the world building in the game as well? that's a big mistake. in the beginning village it can be excused because MC really just skipped past it and just grinded until he could enter the city. But even after he enters the city there are still no details. MC just goes somewhere and he is there. where is the direction? what does the place look like? what are the landmarks? MC is just grind grind grinding that the world building is severely lacking.THE BIGGEST FLAW OF THIS BOOK: EXP GAINBefore level 10, the exp for a level up seems to be in the hundreds. between 10-20 the exp seems to be in the hundred thousands seeing the levels he gained from killing first boss class monster. okay. explainable as he has 300% exp gain from his title. good explanation right? no. MC is a VERSATILE class, which author stated IS INSANELY HARD TO LEVEL UP. Following that reasoning, MC should at best be slightly ahead of the other players, given his knowledge from reincarnation that gives him an edge over others. However, by chapter 34 every other player is still below level 20. guess where our MC is at? OVER 50. Author also stated in the beginning that it took him about 25 years to reach level 500 so here I thought it would take awhile but our MC gets to level 50 is like less than a week (or is it a month?). In any case. at that pace, MC will probably get to level 500 in probably a year.Don't expect too much. It's not the worst, but neither is it the best. If you can ignore the exp problem, this is great for reading if you got nothing else and are waiting for other novels to update.
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Lets see. How to write a review...Ah Translator-san and Editor-san, you guys are amazing! The translation is great, the story is moving along nicely! However, I have some things I want to point out:You guys are extremely slow! If not for the awesomeness of your editor, I would rate you guys 2 out of 5 stars! Every other novels on webnovel has like, 200 chapters a day, but you guys? It takes years to get anything out! And then how dare you decrease your translation amount due to real life issues? Come on, keep up with the times! Then, the character design: how does a 10-year-old boy out drink a plump Taoist who constantly indulges in worldly pleasures? Most, if not all, of the characters are flat. You have the mischievous boy who plays by no one's rules but his own. There's the cold but aloof beauty. There's the beauty that's out to kill him. There's the handsome--but single-minded--guy who's against our MC. MC has a loyal dog---ahem--sidekick, who is there for comedic relief. When will they grow (personality wise)? I guess I should be thanking that our MC isn't a cultivation freak who sits in one place for 15 years to cultivate *cough*Wang Lin*cough*. Then, everyone's constantly howling. They're secretly werewolves in human skin, I tell you. Even that deadly Python Toad is no exception. The world is like any other "cultivating" worlds out there. There's a level structure that these worlds can't seem to escape. There's also a sect, and the sect hands out missions. People fly on swords and tries to earn cultivation resources. I guess it can't be help though, since you'll want to sell what works. I'll even bet $10 bucks that there will be a tournament arc. And then there will be "world-shaking" beauties with skins "as smooth as jade" and as "soft as silk". It's too bad you won't be able to bet with me. :P The story is great though! Our MC takes us off the conventional path. He doesn't behead everyone in sight, and he doesn't become the white knight either. Instead, he treads more by the twilight, pushing and pulling when needed to accomplish what he wants (doesn't care too much for the thoughts and opinions of others). My favorite part was when he decides to run with his fat friend, for no reason other than "you're suppose to run after you do something bad." I actually LMAO'd that time! So far, I hope the story keeps developing as to how it currently is. I don't want him to get any quick power ups, as it'll detract from the one thing that distinguishes this story apart from other cultivating novels. But, thank you very much, sir editor for taking your time to review this novel! :PHi Myriea. I love your kid's picture. Makes me smile when I see him.
So I didn't actually read the novel yet however from the synopsis I could tell that this is one my brothers GENDER EQUALITY for all men and women