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Its a great concept for a story that is developed well. but big issue i have that makes it near impossible to keep going is the overused troupe of every conceiving him as weak. for me it just causes such frustration that I struggle to push through and continue.
I love the world background, the power and types, I really love, there's nothing to say on this novel if his writing is average his mind and thinking and creating world background is awesome. I also like the plot when a tamer step unto the path of tamer, they will be cursed by the world.
This is an excellent novel with a well thought out beginning and structured storyline. The author has not neglected the set up of the new world and every new character POV adds something to that detail. I like that we see the mc before his reincarnation rather than him simply waking up in a random body with his entire history and past forgotten. Glimpses of his former persona come through in his reasoning and there is logic behind his actions based on that prior knowledge which really adds layers of depth to the character and its really refreshing to read. Keep up the good work!
Wow that is a awesome novel I will wait for more entertainment so hurry up please.the is also good the plot and everything the story yet so good luck
Hi there,Here I'm back with my shameless review for my own work.This novel is my second creation, I would say.So it should be better that my previous one.As usual I will still be making a Sci-Fi vs Fantasy setting.Kingdom Building will be happening later on.I know that the prologue might be a bit info dump but it was needed later on.Of course, I will still try to improve more than ever before.
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Really well written. Some parts of the Novel I find it a bit strange, but the World Build and Character design really helps ignore these small 'inconsistencies'. If you really love the Novel "Release That Witch" or the show Game of Thrones then this novel is for you. The mind of the author is truly incredible for creating such a well written story behind each character, and the amount of the detail he places on the regions and Kingdoms is amazing.
First 20 Chapters impression.Eerie Monster Hunter, but Urban. There is magic, there is tech. Guns are taxed heavily, so people prefer to use body enhancement procedure and potions but the mc didn't have all of that as of moment, but he is already stronger than those who utilize them.It is the nutshell version of it. If you want to know more details, read more :D
Not bad but definitely not the best. Great idea though as a suggestion I would recommend you read Duel cultivation return of the god of pleasure to gain some ideas on what is lacking not saying it's the best but it will definitely give you some insight that could be a plus for you and your novels progression. Still your story is pretty good the idea is excellent any read the recommendation and you'll understand what I'm saying. Thank you and good luck ?
First off people forget not all of us professionals, but that can be remedied with learning along the way. I also like it when the MC has nice names so Chase alone is a plus for me. I would suggest shorter sentences which I am always told is better *advice from my proofreader* I notice a lot of times the reader might be confused because we don't see their emotion being read just their dialogue readout which is the most jarring part for me. My immersion isn't complete though. I hope the author takes more time to study other books and continue to grow with their work, but there is always time.
I really like where this story is going. I’m looking forward to the next chapters and where the future of this story will take us.I really like this book keep up the good work!