it was okay like most of the manga or manhua stories and might have copied some style from them. good timepass , kept me entertained that's all I have to say.
unique storyline that different than average novel but still give you nice plot character development and honestly the girls get fall in love too fast but no problem i like it ?
Ok from the starts this story is set to make anyone that thinks logical go insane. He was nr. 1 in the world with the best guild why accept the fight in the first place , but with that contract this crosses illogical thinking into retardation if the things were reverse yes that would have made some sens but even then why risk it , even as nr.2 the amount of money and influence he would have to risk it on a duel kinda idiotic .
I am actually really sad. This story was so good but the author just had to put in soo much filler. Chapter 150 and still at the starting village is simply an insane concept for me. It had great potential but the filler is just wierd.
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Garbage, the author baits you into reading by telling you about the rewards the mc is getting but then pulls this extemely overused, cliche and disgusting "t-the mc can't use these rewards, his foundation can't take it! p-please t-think about his foundation!" plot and makes the mc a generic "slow cultivator who can fight people across realms
Cardboard world and characters. Lots of inconsistencies and omissions. Everything seems to play along with the main character. The protagonist is not distinguished by intelligence and ingenuity, his victory in battle is known from the very beginning. The plot is short and very straightforward.
MC doesn’t face slap characters, characters face slap themselves. Growing his beasts? He rather buys it! This novel doesn’t follow the usual routine. It’s not cliche at all. I love this. It's been a very satisfying read. Flaw: There is no exact closure to Arcs or Characters. Nothing conclusive. Just expect slow development. But I really love the Comedy-Style.
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nggak tahu mau komen apa eh?? sumpah kagak ngerti sama bahasa Inggris yang sepadat itu amat dah ah? Tapi beberapa kata mungkin tahu artinya. semangat ya semoga bisa masuk rank
Grammar and word choice is meh, much room for improvement. There are also some redundant words here and there. Not many descriptive words, some even repeat often. Other than that, it's pretty interesting.
Typical reincarnation system novel except with zombies and evolutions instead of cultivation. Overall, the writing has tons of mistakes even 70 chapters in and constantly distracts you from the story. Next, Im assuming the author isnt a native english speaker so they use different terms for cities, towns, etc. and gets very confusing. The author also repeats a lot of info and sometimes incorrectly which can lead to confusion also. So if you like it, read it if you want but i put my piece here.