ForeverQuest Online

Yeah, I don't know, man. I'm 135 chapters in, and seeing this random dude show up called Long Chen repeatedly is annoying. Why add a cliche xianxa mc? To be a parody? It is not all that funny, to be honest. Just kill him off already... Oh, we can't because he is supposed to be a fucking parody. I even checked in the later chapters, and he is still around, lol. Come on, author; people have been complaining about him ever since he showed up. The author messes up on names quite often. This is supposed to be a harem novel, right? Where is the romance or harem in this novel? Our actual MC complains about not being able to bang a woman, but yet he's just chillin. I'll give another review when more chapters are released; however, I enjoyed the beginning of this quite a lot. I personally feel like it has been going downhill ever since this ”parody” showed up. At least the author is stable in updates, though.

Typical reincarnation system novel except with zombies and evolutions instead of cultivation. Overall, the writing has tons of mistakes even 70 chapters in and constantly distracts you from the story. Next, Im assuming the author isnt a native english speaker so they use different terms for cities, towns, etc. and gets very confusing. The author also repeats a lot of info and sometimes incorrectly which can lead to confusion also. So if you like it, read it if you want but i put my piece here.

It's a good novel. I don't currently have the energy to write a proper review so I will just say my thoughts.Writing quality: I'm not a native English speaker so I can't give a 100% accurate review but I think it's good.Story development: It's still very early in the story so there isn't much to say but it's currently pretty good.Character design: The Mc with how he views everything is very irritating in the beginning. I know that he only views it as a game but his lack of interest in the "lore" and complaining about how realistic the game is. It's just very irritating to read. The other characters are good but they lack enough chapters to get fully developed. Still, they are all mostly enjoyable.Updating stability: It's currently good.World background: The world-building is good but the system appears to little. He doesn't have any status screen. While he can get missions there isn't any specific way how. There also barely exists a way for the Mc to consistently grow stronger.Another small problem that will be solved in the future is the game itself. From my understanding, it's a real world and multiple copies of the game were sold so shouldn't he find other players? That is of course unless his exclusive copy was the only one that let someone enter the real world. Still too little is explained about the game itself and those that sold it. Not that it's a real problem since it will be explained in the future.

The story seems nice with a uncommon system that I personally have not seen before. But unfortunately its a real pain to read due to bad editing and some grammar mistakes, Hopefully Author-san can get an editor to make it more smooth to read, until then thats the best I can say...

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Er Gen >> i eat tomatoes!!!!!anyone that diagrees is has no taste.........................................................................................