This got boring real quick. Same thing happening, he getting grime traveled to 5 years a head and have to explain why he disappeared. Useless drama I quit. I came expecting something else but still read but it didn’t change my opinion
very well written, grammar is on point and author explains everything so well. 5 stars on everything! i love it!
this is the first review I have written, so here we go. it is a great story so far, maybe a little fast but very enjoyable. I hope the story keeps getting updated. I would love to see the more technical side of running a crime organization. this story should be higher and more popular. the author seems to have trouble getting motivated to make more chapters. to him, I say you are doing amazing, and your stuff is worth my time at least
I loved it and i think i am simp for lillith now,And Sakamaki a chad confirm,Anyway about the story it's very well written and very makes you read more with every chapter!!Going to my library!!
Typical sexist chinesw novel. Every paragraph has a cringe inducing feeling. At the start of the book you can relate to the user's comments on every single paragraph. Later on I think most people have already left.
hope you'll get well soon. ...............
Okey to start of the premise of the story got me interested to check this story out. However the first chapter made me want to drop it like it’s hot. But decided to keep at it since you usually need 30-100 chapters in these kind of stories to get a real opinion. Let’s just say that while the writing did get better it honestly went from horrible to really bad and thats with an editor. The story overall is quite good though the MC and his choices are simply mindboogling. For instance a ton of information, settings and background is like how it is often done forced into us in large quantities but when it comes to the MC all rules and logic has no effect. I could probably go on and on about stuff like this but overall the story is decent but the writing is killing it, being similar to google translate or somthing on top of the fact that some words seems to be there simply to add to word count. I do appreciate that it has gotten better but in almost all the chapters it would seem a simple thing like reading what has been written would fix things. Like how in one of the chapters around ch 20 it is mentioned that Ashlyn is eating her dead parents only for the later part saying she’s eating the same diet as her parents.
The story is decent, pokemon themed concept but the author hates the MC something fierce, kid made a down right stupid choice that from the world perspective makes NO sense. MC also chooses 'the road less traveled' to help fix his obviously bad choice in starting partners this would have been fine if the author had left the MC average or above somewhere else but NO. Mana capacity, refining, everything that defines this worlds cultivation cycle literally laughs at the kid. Yes he has exceptional willpower and discipline but gets him no better than last place. As the story progresses you realize that many of the decisions he makes confuse people, because from their worlds perspective it makes no fucking sense, why would you give up a MUCH better monster, try to overcome their peak by cultivating yourself so that Ashlyn can benefit from your symbiotic relationship, and deliberately hamstring yourself every chance you get? Next the romance tag, who the HELL lied to you and told you ANY part of your story was romantic or even implied the potential for romance when every female character either makes a smarter life choice and thus gets better opportunities, realizes this man has no life ahead of him since both he and his partner have no talent, or hate him for the very choices he makes?Okay so the premise is good, I love the life partners, the power structure, the female characters and other social interactions, the detailed and refined world setting, even the struggle the MC faces. But the impossible circumstance, tue severe lack of power progression, the lack of romantic progress, and the POS excuse for editing...I can understand that the writers first or even second or third language wasn't English but the editor has NO excuse for this horrendous attempt at a translation. Even after they took over it wasnt a substantial improvement as depicted by the difference between the first 10 chapters and the 11+, I personally took the time out to 'edit' the chapters and Google translate, my dog, and grammar lyrics ALL did a better job... constant changes in tense, consistent changes in gender, little or NO punctuation, inability to maintain proper names, completely mistranslating entire sentences, I mean come on really? Yes I've read worse translated novels on this site however my review of them was just as bad, if not worse, than this one is. The regular mistakes every once in a while like Solo Leveling are acceptable, but we now pay for this novel which means we expect better quality, congrats you finally get paid for your writing, oh **** now they expect better quality ? your failing friend.All-in-all the only reason this novel is even in the top 100 is because of the pokemon ripoff, the only reason its in the top 50 is because of its stable story progression, and the only reason I kept reading was its potential. From me? 2.6 at best ~
I think the author did a really good job with everything I’m Already almost at chapter 50 and I had a really good time reading it. To me this book is a hidden gem.
My Fav Dark-Romance Book From My Favourite Author/Writer...️......
Highly recommended. This book is a masterpiece!
Great going