Abused Little Mate

This is the best Basketball book I seen man just want to say that hope you keep going only regret is that it's not where he could've played Lebron and Kobe in there primes ???

Putting the grammatical errors and the mechanics aside, THIS IS A PRETTY GOOD PLOT! It made me realize that we indeed as writers, have different fortes! I couldn’t do anything like this! Keep it up, Shadow! I could really see potential!

I think I started this novel a few months ago and abandoned it. Now I wish I could go back and slap my past self. I am loving the story so far. Pros:The author does a great job of balancing real life and the virtual world. Romance is nice and doesn’t feel forced. It is a harem, but hopefully it doesn’t go the Qing Shui route. Alpha MC who knows how to treat the ppl he cares about. Characters are fleshed out and the author does a great job of slowly revealing the MCs past, so you can understand the choices Xie Feng makes and his thought process.The fight scenes are fun and exciting. They are vivid enough that I can imagine being there and short enough that I haven’t gotten irritated and skipped chapters. I just started the novel, so I can’t say anything about stability updates.Cons:Grammar could be improved, but it’s not on the scale of sentencing the author to grammar prison. There aren’t 1,000+ chapters to feast on. Conclusion: If you like action, virtual reality, romance, harem, fantasy, I would definitely recommend picking up this novel.

unique storyline that different than average novel but still give you nice plot character development and honestly the girls get fall in love too fast but no problem i like it ?

The name of the story is really catchy. Your writing quality is good too. But the only problem I found is the synopsis. Don't you think it's too short? Maybe a little bit more information would attract more and more readers. Good luck!

Read it till MC gets recruited into the Poison Sect.Don’t like how the MC suddenly left his harem, like when other princes were eyeing his harem MC blows his cover in order to protect them but a few chapters later when he became King he abandons them to go with his aunt to cultivation sect.