So far thie first 20 chapters are really well written. The english grammer and translation is really well done. With mages are too op over and The Legendary Mechanic wrapping up shortly i really hope this magic novel gets picked for continued updates. For i will have a Magic story to replace mages are too op and the world building of the legendary mechanic! Ps i will buy coins to support this story. so please webnovel pick it!
at first the MC development is nice, however this is quickly offset by the amount of back and forth chapters between the MC and other characters. It feels less like a story about the person you want to read about and more like collective shorts.
It's like a badly written version of RSSG. The MC is supposed to be the battle emperor, but he plays like a total newbie, making bad decisions left and right. The game has also just started, yet theres huge guilds with leatherworkers and blacksmiths somehow supplying their armies with full 'bronze level' armor, allowing them to clear out entire leveling zones? Riiiight... This is something that should happen weeks or months later, not on Day 1.Overall, a terrible read.
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Noise Novel, Decent Grammar, Okay world building and concrete story, although why are there 2???Is webnovel glitching or something??????????????????????????????
i found it on scribble, but here have more chapter than there is there any different? and in there it have a good rating so i give you same too and change it accordingly after i read few chapter
A student kills a teacher, the head-boss comes over and is like 'Why they dead'. The mob is like ' Student bad, kill student'. Head-boss is like ' Ah this mob is too much' so decides to hold a battle royal, if Student wins they be free but if they lose, something happens.
????? o really love this novel and I'm really interesting in this novel of yours author..all the best for you author????????????????????????????????????
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Just a simple reviewWriting quality - 5Stability of updating - 5Story development - 5Character design - 5World background - 5This story is different from all the novels i've read.Mc is calm,lazy,smart and antagonist,different from your usual dumb mc.For now he has only one goal which is to find out about his own existence.This is a story that you guys won't regret reading.
The story is too great, its the only novel that is left in my library before....But im going to delete it...Very expensive....???.................................Hope you wont make it, too expensive...
okaayy. . umm... this is my review until chapter 360 its really similar with another novel with the same concept. From the situation and story development, the different is only the name and how long he endure the humiliation. .??