VindamaroonC0k
This needs to be in the voting pool! The quality and story of this novel is unlike any other chinese "occupation" novel I've read!The pace is perfect and character development is believable.It's more in-line with the God of Cooking or God of Music novel in terms of genre and story development. Somewhere between the two, but is way more addictive!I repeat, this needs to be in the voting pool! Please~
Welp. since no one wants to give me a review. Read novel has many mysteries and hidden details so if you don't understand smth you'll most likely see and answer in a later chapter.I'll give a genuine review of my own novel when I'm above 100 chapters I guess.
First of all, the character development is quite lacking. the author didn't explain why MC got this game like system in his mind. what kind of good deeds he had done before which granted him such cheat.Second, the way he stitches wound on Mr. Yang is too exaggerating. the wound is quite deep which affect the blood vessel. it should be stitched with different surgery thread for each type of wound. for the blood vessel, for the tendon and last for the skins. it becomes hilarious when MC did it only in one go of stitches.Third, the way he gets his first fans girl also ridiculous. Just by making stitches on the girl's brother tattoo she gives MC quite a favor. it's not even a wound that life-threatening, you know!
I read this novel's comic version. It is utterly ridiculous background, character are lacking the charm some important characters are missing story is giving another vibe from it like it is not similar to novel . The graphic are lacking ,characters are dull nothing is actually good about the the comic version.
Synopsis sounded fun, but the execution is extremely poor. Could get better later in, but didn't make it past the first 10~ or so. There is no plot development, at one point someone dislikes the main character, then the next they're out on a date with no mention of why or how it got to that point. And when it appeared as if there would finally be some movement, with the MC needing to explain himself, author skips right past it and has MC replace people's memory. The entire story so far is just the main character and his family being inexplicably awkward with events happening that have no build up or even reason to occur.
Idea is good if a bit cliche. But dialogues and characters are as 2d as it gets. For a novel that has "tycoon" in its name prices should have been more thought-out i think.And less said about the harem the better. Can only recommend it if you read your stories with your brain off and you love MC harem stories I guess. Sorry ??u200d♂️
The Smiling, Proud Wanderer is a Wuxia novel by Jin Yong (Louis Cha). It was first serialized in Hong Kong in the newspaper Ming Pao from 20 April 1967 to 12 October 1969.Alternative Names:• Laughing in the Wind• State of Divinity• The Peerless Gallant Errant• The Proud and Gallant Wanderer• Xiao Ao Jiang Hu• 笑傲江湖Translators:• Lanny Lin (Chapter 1 - 21)• HHaung (Chapter 21)• Pokit (Chapter 21 onwards)• Bliss (Chapter 30 and 31)Editor:• HHaung (Chapter 21 onwards)The reason I'm putting up this novel is so I can read it for personal use. I watched the State of Divinity (1996 TV series) and loved that show. I knew there was a Novel of it but never spent the time to look for it until now. Was reading it online but the chapters very LONG and I keep loosing track of where I left off so I came here. Reading it off Webnovel is so much easier especially since it keeps track of where you left off. Unfortunately Webnovel has a 20k word / 100k character limit for each chapter so I had no choice but to chop up the chapters into parts.For those who also want to read this feel free. I am not taking someone else's work and passing them off as my own, full credit is given to the original writer, translators and editor as listed in the descriptions, plus the content of this novel is free online in multiple sources for everyone to read. So putting this up on Webnovel is just for my own convenience sake and anyone else who wishes to read this
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Well the story is very interesting. The plots need a little spice but other than that the story is superbbb.....hhhhh. also if you can increase the speed of your updating
This is a good story among so many trash webnovels. While people will think in the first chapters why the MC doesn't Just sleep until he becomes OP,it will be explained later. The MC doesn't want to be OP without doing nothing. Just think about it,how boring your life would be if you were OP (Just like Saitama)? You wouldn't feel ALIVE and the MC Is Immortal,so... This is a new world with many new things to see and we know that there is a Universe and Multiverse to explore. I hope in 200-300 chapters we Will be in another Planet and It would be cool if the MC creates an army throughout the Universe with the groups of people he helped because it would be like a Family and the MC won't feel alone
About time
Waiting more updates already read every chapter . worth paying ......
