Fangs of the Unbroken

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Not great but good enough to spend a few minutes of your day on, I wouldn't mind reading more of this. I don't really care that he tells others his stats and skills, I find the hiding of info from people trope a little annoying at times. Also it's not really detrimental to the story right now, it's not like others won't figure it out sooner or later. His luck might not be a super power i.e it's not dropping UBER AWESOME stuff for him but it's more than enough to give him a slight advantage. He's not wiping out his enemies with a wave of his hand, those types of novels are fun to read for a bit but it gets boring in my opinion. Overall a fun read.

at first the MC development is nice, however this is quickly offset by the amount of back and forth chapters between the MC and other characters. It feels less like a story about the person you want to read about and more like collective shorts.

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"How can you say a story is logical?To make your story more logical there are two criteria that you need to meet: Consistency and Coherency. Consistent: Your story must follow its own rules and norms, and it must not contradict itself."

I really enjoy your work! I'd love to stay connected and keep up with your latest creations. Do you have any social media or email? It would be great to be in touch~