The novel that you write is very fun and interesting to me.I love reading it very much when I'm free.every story plot in all the chapter is great and good.I wish I could read it every day to fill my day.I also hope that the authors continue writing to the end and I always support your hard work.Thank you and don’t drop or reboot it because I like read your novel.
The story's pacing is just about right without getting you bored if you binge it but i wish there was more detail put into world building since i sometimes get lost when a random concept or POV is on but over all a good read for so little chapters out
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Great book! The writing is fast paced but not confusing. The characters are well written as well. I'm really enjoying this and can't wait to see where it goes! Would recommend!!
NTR is a BIG NO for me.......................................................................So, the Story & Character only get 1*, if it was possible i would 0*......
Faceslapping is an art, which this author isn’t too skill at. A proper faces lap Requires a setup. First the MC has to provoke criticism. The critism has to have cetwin validity and has some actual negative effect on the mc. Then the mc has to show that the critism is wrong.Unfortunsteely, this MC shows that the crprism about him is correct. Just that he kills all his critice in sneak attacks.
Very good take on system theme , beyond the basics the history brings fresh ideias e creative character , just a more stable chapter launch rate
I would not recommend this novel. Breaks immersion immediately but taking modern day leaders and stuffing them into the novel. Prose is meh, and a little too much nationalism for me.
I only wish the author would update a little faster, they added Privilege chapters but slowed the updating down to maybe 3 a week, making the privilege seem useless especially the higher tier ones.
I've never read a game novel before. But after finding this jewel, i can say the plot is very intriguing with interesting character. Hiro is the first MC in male lead story that i liked!
Really good writing and story development, the characters are interesting and intriguing and the world design is pretty good.Main complaints (or warnings to new reader's)DONT binge read this, its too complicated to binge read and need to have breaks to enjoy fully (unfortunately i didnt do this and paid for it as i got kind of fed up with it.)The story is slow paced so if ur expecting action upon action then this isnt the story for you.The story is more about introspection and wisdom than it is cultivation and action which for some is great but if ur looking for a light hearted novel this isn't it.Plays on some fairly complicated topics such as AI, Lifestyle, Relationships, Family, Loss and a lot of introspective themes.
I have been mostly enjoying the story. I have quite an ability to suspend disbelief and just go along with the flow of a story. I like the characters, the backstories and families. But the writing is killing me. Since I started reading web novels, I have gradually acquired the ability to ignore typos and poor grammar to a large extent, but since stories magically turn into three-dimensional movies or holograms in my head, I have great difficulty with behavior of characters that seems preposterous or caricaturish (if that is a word.) They kick me out of my 3D movie and remind me that this is just words. The main character laughs and chuckles every second time he opens his mouth, frequently described as "lowly"." To quote Inigo Montoya, "You keep using that word. I do not think it means what you think it means." Lowly = of humble or base birth. It has nothing to do with sound volume. Also people sigh, loudly, frequently. In real life people sigh because they are frustrated, disappointed, depressed or really tired, and it's considered rude or a comment. One character laughs then sighs two seconds later. Another sighs, chuckling. Try doing that. It's not possible. The worst one is the use of the word "softly" with just about every smile in the first 20 chapters. Softly implies intimacy. Smiling softly is something you would do during a touching moment with a loved one, or while looking down at your newborn baby. It's not something a stranger does to someone they meet the first time for an interview. Reading the softly smiling over and over again gave me the creeps, like I'm reading about a serial killer softly smiling at the knife he just used to slice the throat of his latest victim, or fondling the organ he removed as a trophy. Yuck!!!! Author, please learn the many different types of smiles, and that the only time people laugh so much when they interact with others is when they're nervous, flirting, or are Santa Claus, paid to say ho ho ho. If you could remove the strange emoting the characters are doing, I'm sure I could spend most of my time enjoying my 3D movie of your story. I suggest you do some people watching. For instance, you don't talk about hand gestures at all. A lot of people talk with their hands. They also fiddle with their hair, and touch things and people around them. You also don't mention body language at all. I don't mean that you have to add all of those at the same time, just sprinkling in a little of all of them at different times brings characters to life.