As of around 20 chapters in, I am really enjoying it. The starting concept confused me a bit, but once the story got into the meat, it greatly improved. I really like the concept so far, and I am excited to see where it goes.
I can only applaud for what you have written. The way you describe every detail of the world is fantastic! The plot of the novel has caught me and I will gladly continue reading :D
I gave 5 stars because never seen a system like this before at least.Name raw: 支付九十九元：为你缔造神秘葬礼Author: 火锅加香菜 Lv.3Status: Ongoing
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I've read upto chapter 2 and honestly, the storyline is quite interesting, especially the characters. There are some typos but they can be ignored. Really looking forward to the future chapters
Story has an interesting take on the game elements and the characters have been given more development than the average Chinese xianxia, but the story can get a bit annoying at times when things aren't properly explained. My biggest gripe, however, is the frequent spelling and grammar mistakes. Some of these should be easily caught with a basic word processor, but many others are homophones or just similar sounding words that are not at all related. If these were infrequent I wouldn't mind so much, but they often occur several times a chapter or even multiple times in a sentence to the point it becomes illegible. Going over some of these earlier chapters to fix these mistakes would probably be a good idea to retain new readers.
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The Mc is so coward he didn't even dare to save his student and friends who is tortured he even brainwash his pet, and if he afraid really of death then he could just stay in seclusion forever until he reach the peak of cultivation, this novel is so confusing like i thought there are just one demon lord turned out there are millions and the cultivation level you said mahayana realm was the highest but no suddenly there more, the mc be like everything is danger!
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Shameless!!!I am Shameless!!!I am a Shameless Author!!!That wants to just earn exp!!!!And that is a good thing!!!!!!!!................FYI this is a good book. Try it out...
The One the best review is the no review...
because you can't describe it in words... All the best to the novel... [img=exp][img=exp][img=exp]
.....................................WHY DOES IT HAVE TO HAVE YURIII WITHIN THE MC HAREM EVEN WITHOUT HIS PRESENCE!!!?.......................................................IT SPOILT MY ENTIRE ENTHUSIASM!