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It's something different from what i read but definitely like it . Few Grammatical errors here and there but the story is super good to keep on reading .I recommend it to everyone
This is a good system novel, the author did a great job in giving us the information about the characters they are on point and very easy to understand, I read a lot of system novels and this one is really good, I suggest you give it a try even the writing quality is good.
Ha! So stupid, the Author is so stupid! He should have been attracted to the "True Immortal Cultivation Faction" from the first time he cultivated because he gathered all qi in the whole globe to the location of that idiotic Mc. And as that idiot said he is the only one who can cultivate the qi in the atmosphere, so if there is this so-called True Immortal Faction then they should also know the qi in the atmosphere and had long traces that idiot. Really "True Immortal Cultivation Faction" has no role in this story, the author probably added this None-Twisted faction to prolong the story.
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Great Story so far lovin' it and i greatly recommend YOU the reader of this review to read this amazing novel it's not a new genre or something fresh and unique but, it's a shiny gem, like that guy from Lotr that say my precious, that kind of level
OwO
WQ-5stars
SD-5stars
CD-3stars still early 15chp in so yeh
US-4stars just because
WB-3stats cause still 15 chapters in UwU
OwO >w< 0w0 ¶w¶ =w= ~w~
Whoever likes Sign-In Buddha's Palm, vote for this! This is a great, and for-reals low-key OP MC. Although not as low-key as Buddha's Palm, so far there are no signs of the MC exposing himself, or the frustrating 'hinting that the OP guy is actually me.'
Wait... You actually wrote this? I thought it was joke xD Well free 5 star rating for you. Yeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeet.
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There is a lot of cliche in that novel, that cliche we all love. A boy is unable to cultivate due to somebody problem, a master that reforges his body to allow cultivating, and a dedicated MC.
What else do you want more? Just go and read.
The only problem I found in this novel is that it had too many long paragraphs, maybe it's just my eyes but I would like to see some breaks to make things easier.
Great job author, interesting plot, I just started reading and I'm liking it so far, it just needs a little bit of editing and you are good to go. keep up the good work.?
the story concept is good, game talent in martial art world. ealier chapter has a nice progress, the plot is not too fast and also not too slow. but in the 10+ chapters the author lost his brain juice and wasted 10 chapters more with fillers that can be deleted without disturbing the plot and then the story become unworthy to read anymore. so dont wasted ur coins or tickers to read it. i drop this one for now... i hope author rewrite the story with less fillers and less wasted chapters.