My first time reading such a writing style.The concept is really good, but I feel like the execution hasn't gone properly,There are far too many explanations rather than character interaction, it feels like just reading a paragraph than an interactive novel.Other than that, the s*x scenes are very well written(yeah...I enjoyed them), it seems like the author has very good experience in it! Just kidding.Looking forward to the next chapters and will definitely come back to read it.
I'm on chapter 3, and boy is this story doing a number on me. I normally don't read stories involving systems, but this one caught my attention and interest. I like the character and how it started. The descriptions and the characters feel real. The world is very well constructed, you deserve five stars for that! And your stability of updates, you gotta teach me how to update like that man! My only complaint is, the grammar and the punctuation. It's good but it can always be better. And be sure to capitalize the start of every line!
The authors world background is amazing and his grammar is good too. I like Vikram already, hope to see more of him
Just finished reading, good story, I really enjoyed it, a shame it was dropped.
Will this be picked again? Contrary to garbage novels that are translated nowadays, such good novel like this was dropped... shame; please pick it up...
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It had good start but the author really gave up on the system and the MCs character in depth. I only reccomend this novel when boredom has reached you to the point where you too tired to even think. Then it is passable to read. I stopper at chapter 42.
The idea of the story is quite unique for me. Most of stories like these go like saving the heroines but this story will save the villainess that went crazy of different plots. There are different world backgrounds and diverse characters. I'm quite excited on the interactions between the MC and the vilainesses. I'm also excited on the development of Jiang Li throughout the story. I wonder what will happen to him?
An amazing Christian romance novel with the unveiling of the reality of the spiritual and supernatural facet of life.I give a wonderful thumbs up to the author.? You have a great writing style.Simple language that is harnessed to show beauty.I love the characters. Particularly, Sarah. Aaron had such a dark past. Thankfully, there is hope for all who are in darkness and that hope is Jesus Christ.I highly recommend Bittersweet to everyone.
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Probably one of the only sci-fi stories that are truly good in this site. I'm can wait to see how the sequel develops. I hope the author stays true to his words and delivers it to us.