I only read up to ch 8 at the time I wrote this review, so take it with a grain of salt.This book got potential. The blurb interest me tbh, because I like independent, strong, and self-sufficient female lead.However, the first chapter opening was confusing, speaking of writing, although it got better soon. There are a few typos, but I can manage to auto-correct in my head. At least, it wasn't as bad as other books I've read, but it does distracted me from being immersed. Some scenes, seemed to have weird, unsatisfyingly explained, timing that just doesn't fit with events happening in previous scenes.Characters feels a bit rushed. Some are unnecessarily mysterious, others are kinda have no reason to behave the way they are with their initial background. Even the main lead was kinda superficial, because while readers get why she wanted revenge logically, there wasn't much too make her relatable emotionally. Story development up to the one I read feels rushed (which contributed to the section above). Personally, I feel like the impact of the breaking point wasn't meaningful because the lack of insight into main char's psychological state. How distraught was she? How deep the betrayal she feels? And this continues, with main char facing events after events with "downtime" scenes just being kinda info dumped.I prefer slow-burning stories for this kind of theme, so maybe that was why I find it hard getting immersed. I do not mean to discourage, so please don't be discouraged author!! The plot is interesting, after all, and the promise the blurb sells (revenge story like no other) pique my interest to see how it unfolds.
Currently up to 90 chapters. So far the story is boring. If you read the 1st 30 chapters then it pretty much the same the whole way. So far no cultivation. All just making and selling pills and getting stronger slowly
Good job author .... Really made the story intriguing.. . I want to read the next chaps faster... I liked how you detailed the characters ... It's really good..
Extremely great work done by the author. The intensive plots and chenistu is sculpted in a brilliant way. A book recommended to everyone interested in such adventurous genres!
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I like the way you write things out. I enjoyed everything while I was reading and the story itself seems pretty interesting. Keep them coming, I'm sure this story will do very well.
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This is a great novel and I really enjoy this novel so far as the story is very well made and the characters development is also great in my opinion.
Damm.... It's good.... I like how the mc is being developed and hope to a good backstory btw ml and fl....... Also release more chapters ....Overall a good until I have read...
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Couldn’t get past the point where he got his system. I feel like I am reading a summary of a bastardized amilgimation of system novels and clichés wherein every character has the personality of a wet blanket and the worldbuilding is unironically worse than a childrens storybook.
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