"Little one stop struggling and listen to me." Rena said, in a genteel voice like one would hear from their mother trying to lovingly explain to their child. " You have most likely been alone all your life do you even know what you are? How truly rare it is that you have survived this long, that you are most likely the only one of your kind to have escaped their eye's unnoticed. But in the end you have no parents to help guide you through life's many hurdles and wonders. So please stop struggling and let me help you little one there are many dangers in these lands and I can help protect you from them if you stick with me."
The firmness of his voice made the couple excited. "Who's the lucky lady?"
But the only way the King could gave their order was to say specific number which were based on the straws number that the other player drew.
"What if nothing happens when you stay with me?"
"I haven't gone on a holiday in a while so I'm just as excited as everyone else." Kyle said as he started thinking about how Lila wouldn't allow him to come with her everytime she had to go over to a different country for some reason, 'Maybe she was afraid she'll lose me again?' 'Wasn't it her fault in the first place?'
C3: I suppose this is what happens when there's nothing left to do.
"You should leave before you lose more than just a subordinate!"
Another good novel from author-san, if you are a cultured .. wink* wink* you should read this novel.
As of chapter 21: pretty good start. It reminds me of Lord of the Rings like other reviewers have said especially due to the naming in volume 1. Pacing and length seems on track for regular novel length which is a nice change of pace from the typical length of webnovels: appallingly long (which isn’t a bad thing, just hard to get used to). Also volume 1’s ending was pretty surprising! I like the twist. Grammar and writing is pretty good. As for cons: classic case of telling instead of showing; for example in volume 2 instead of saying weird things are happening I want to follow the characters on a day and see them react to the weird things and hear them lampoon ’wow this is getting really old’ and infer myself that this has been becoming a problem before any exposition starts happening… sometimes it feels like I’m reading a summary report rather than a novel. The other thing is in volume 1 everyone repeats the same platitudes every chapter: it will be dangerous but you are not alone… well but a lot of these problems should be resolved as the author gets more writing experience :) enjoying the story.
Great book . It has elements of Warhammer, RimWorld, etc. As luck would have it I read from the translations so I don't judge the grammar.
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The main problem for me is the mc. He is highly incompetent. And just thinking about the opportunity he is missing out on just because of his mindset is pathetic. And at this point others are making more use of his inn and getting stronger than him because he doesn’t understand the features of his own inn. Now it has become more of a charity than inn.