Mutation is my cultivation! The less human, the more divine. Witness Li Changmeng's eldritch ascension at White Cloud Temple - where golden lotuses bloom from chaos and peach nectar brings revelations.
Курама стал добрым и я не против этого но хирузен здесь страдает слабоумием когда просто допустил кураму тренировать Наруто .....................,....................................,...............,.....................................................................
Some chapter are like X happend then next chapter they do X again but change the place, how people meet etc. Like author had 2 ideas but forget about it. Nobody ever proof read it and its awful.some chapters are in the wrong order.That kind of poor work is becoming more and more popular on webnovel.......Its sad cause master/disciple are one 9f my fav stuff
I like it very much though I almost drop it when he is such a coward, thankfully i read few more chapter to find out that he can be an alpha MC sometimes
can i read the story for free somewhere else..............................................................................................................
While this is a good concept and not a bad storyline the writing is not very good, for example there is very little on terms of both character development and backstory. The writing development and how the author tells you about what has happend and how he got the parasite system is a bit crude and dry.This is not meant to be demeaning nor could I do any better, it is just meant to be constructive critasims from your friendly neighbourhood hypocrite.
