Great read loved it thank you keep going think you have a great story and plenty possibilities to explore like the Harem vibe that you are creating would be nice to see some that our MC opens his eyes onto all the subtle clues that they drop
A failure's hopeful journey is one captivating isekai stylebook, although there's a twist which gains it even considerably. I'm just at the start of the book to make a very good review but it shows promise.
I wish it was a longer length story. Also, the ML needed a bit more personality, he was a bit bland. The ending chapters were rushed and seemed more like chapter summaries. If this is rewritten again then I would read it since it was good.
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First of all, I am not a pro at making reviews 2nd It's my opinion and what I think about it. 3rd I don't care if anyone will be offended by this.and 4th I read up to chapter 9The story has good potential but grammar has problems, the systems (power level, the name color) is not good (maybe gets better later), plot armor is thick, I think the MC is dumb and contradicts himself.Over all good but the mc to cliche for me and the grammar and systems need polishing.
The synopsis, tags and name of the novel don't add up with chapter 2 and forward.!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
story's great and it's freaking free! so what's stopping you from reading this! nothing! oh just one thing, update is currently unstable so just waiting for author to overcome whatever issue they're going through. until then, 4.4 stars from me
There's been many fusion novels introduced lately but the cover and war-setting has me interested for some reason. I'm not sure if I should get my hopes up or not. ?
Amazing Plot.. I loved the concept so much and your writing style is very easy. I could visualize every scenes and I enjoyed what I saw while reading ( well that's the fun part of reading) Good work, Author!!
Not bad actually. Your story have unlimited potential especially set in a sandblock game like Minecraft. Character development is quite slow but smooth, suggest add in modpacks especially RL craft to make your story make more "sense". I can see your pattern of the story and plot, super excited for the next series.
Disappointment ....................................................................................................................................................................................................................Generic Chinese Novel
The story starts strongly with a believable character suffering from an unjust trauma. It's an excellent setting for a weak-to-strong character. The author has a great imagination, give it a try!