The story is pretty cool. If I had to point out one problem, it would be the fact that the dialogue between the characters are a lil bit forced, but it's alright... also please give more updates the cliffhangers are literally causing me immense mental, physical, and astral pain.
Great stuff. What I can say
5 STAR FOR EFFORT AND ALL BOOK STORY. GOOD STUFF READ PLEASE
FULL SUPPORT
MAKE MORE AND MORE BOOK LIKE THIS..
HI AUTHOR BEST OF LUCK
I really like the story. the author can describe the story really well. but, i feel pity for Nico. keep spirit author .keep up the good work.
I love your novel and I'm looking forward to the daily updates in the future. keep up the good work and hurry up and start the romance
The is pretty good considering how many novel like this have the same genre of choices system and how the author takes on how to run a business is pretty good and I like how the MC is not super smart but not an idiot as well. Overall it has a good potential hope this gets picks cause I like business genre novel.
definitly sounds interstings hope its not just synopsis. and if you have its raw name please give it to us ............................................................
My disappoinment is immesurable in this one. the idea and world building is good and has a pontential but he ruined it by he's twisted fetishes.
Mc development is none existent, instead it's a character regression, Author at start will make you believe that he's character is decent and have bottomline but you will get disappointed because author will slowly trasform him like those trash young master who will resort for blackmailing, forcing innocent women without those he can't get a love one despite having advantages like bs dragon pheromone or bloodline. And don't focus on getting stronger by cultivating instead focus on scheming to look like the mc smart but clearly fail it horribly because he's scheme is how to make all the woman he's slave and use them but instead get in trouble because how beutiful they are and need his saving. how idiotic his decision by giving his woman an world experience (example:he literally bring qin slave 'no cultivation just starting' and gaoling 'low cultivation' to an inheritance cave full of strong cultivator and expect them to protect them because of their background really? How idiotic that is. By the way mc cultivation is 1st qi condensation bring an weak woman to dangerous place considered a smart scheme of mc, I can only say Bruh..).
Writing quality is horrible at start where there is to much repetition of words, sentence and plotline. The good thing around 300 chapter is it lessen the repetition of words, sentence and phrase but it still there. For plots no changes it's still the same.
Overall this is a story of a royal dragon that hide to a mortal focus in scheming in how to force and blackmail woman to became his sex-slave, instead of focusing in cultivating and dominate his enemy through power or strength like a true dragon should act because of how prideful and arrogant they are they despite schemer because for them schemer is for the weak, like a human excel at, not a dragon dominate through power( for me he does'nt ressemble any dragon at all, he should be a human or a snake it much more believable). And the title does'nt make sense royal dragon and phoenix? he's empress phoenix has no screen time at all she only show for snu snu, moral support and managing the background the other slave have more screen time and development than her who supposed to be the main heroined. Any way, there is still hope for this if author really want to continue on scheming atleast stop the blackmailing and the woman slave it's very predictable because i can predict his revenge he will surely make his brother wife a slave and fvxk her in front of him the same with his father nothing change like what his doing throught the novel.
This book has a interesting twist and turn from bad to good and good to great with a cool way to get something that was missing/taken for years.
I love this book! It is fast paced and I was not expecting the twist. I don't want to spoil but I really enjoyed Eleand's adventure. Plus the descriptive writing, I felt I have been trasported into their world.
The novel is good..... Mc doesn't become outright OP, have little mental issues (which is expected with regression) please don't give it up. Though status page update would have been good. Like how while fighting his agility suddenly becomes 50?
good
I can see "My Disciples Are All Villains" vibe or not? and still i waiting the Raw