Ride on author. Please update more frequently. Talia is gonna be a mad character I'm sure of it. Let's just wait for character development to kick in. So sear readers or potential ones, you've come to the right place.
Might read, added to library.
What a novel this is, I love it and would recommend it to my friends. Great job Author excellent work and love the way you created your characters, they might be a few mistakes but that can be fixed and easily done with So I highly recommend this book good job
A well done story better than many stories here on webnovel deserving more popularity. There are times that story seems like a high school drama, but I didn't mind it. Given their age, amnesia, and discovery of a new world puts a lot of pressure on the characters. You can feel the emotion and struggles of the characters as they fight to save a planet. All this happens in less than 1 month. The were always constant questions and mysteries the characters face that they slowly get unraveled over time.
There are some grammatical errors but very little and do little to take away from the story. I felt fights were a weaker apart of the story along with the villains. After 800 years, they felt lax and not strong overall probably from arrogance? When facing multiple dark mages it felt like a 1v1 dueling style. The alpha felt like the weakest ones maybe due to not being able to control her powers?
Overall, good story that deserves it's rating.
For those of us climbing to the top of the food chain, there can be no mercy. There is but one rule: hunt or be hunted...On Earth, one had to be mindful of rumors, it was easy to ruin a person's life with some malicious lies. It's because we are all mortals, the laws of the world are different, and individuals could not surpass the power of society.But not here.
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I will give 1 star for all books which splits one chapter into many for releasing.
We are at 50 collections, yuhuu! Anyway, are you enjoying the story so far? If yes, please let me know with, Idk, a review or even a comment or by voting; I'd love to hear your opinion :)
This looked like was going to be a amazing story. Kept me waiting for updates. Would have been probably one of best books on webnovel if author would not have died of corvid when first started spreading.
1 chapter in and i couldn't force myself to read more...the writing quality is horrendous enough to cause a headache. I'm aware that english isn't the author's native language, but even a cursory skimming at chapter 1 will reveal atleast 50+ mistakes...and its not just grammatical mistakes, there are even mistakes for something as basic as gender mentions: where the MC is referred by "her" instead of "his" a lot of times in just the first chapter...Still this is not the worst english writing i've read, but its almost reaching the worse ones...And about the "English is not my 1st language" excuse, although i've seen countless authors use that i still don't understand how that logic works...You're writing on an english platform, so you should atlest learn basic English grammar and writing skills before you decide to post a half-as*ed story and not use more advanced and difficult words to make is easier on yourself...Thats all.?
A repetitive, one-dimensional story centered around an MC who simps for a forced love interest. At every turn, everyone disdains the MC until he face slaps them with his ability. He then is ‘magnanimous’ by giving those he slapped benefits.
I’m more than 200 chapters in and disappointment is all I can really say. It took a drastic turn ever since he started simping for the girl.
Verdict: Trash
Well there aren't enough chapters to actually give constructive criticism but still the story seems interesting and a little new, will give a better review when there are more chapters.
One advice though, try to improve character interactions their interactions don't feel that natural yet.
For now adding it to my "to read in a month" list