He had heard that the Food Court was still closed, something about having to make the sure evidence wasn't tainted or something.
It’s truly one of the better female protagonist stories on Qidian. It does have the typical “Mary Sue” feel that’s prevalent in most web novels, be they male or female centric. I like that the storyline is easy to follow and that characters aren’t one dimensional. You don’t get a character who’s terrible and evil and who the minute he meets the mc, decides to blame all woes on the mc. It also contains some values of feminism, clearly criticizing a society where men are the sole inheritors. Overall, the characters are nicely paced; no one is too one dimensional and character actions are understandable, which is something that I don’t see in a lot of web novels. The flow of the story is nice and humor exists to lighten the mood. I guess you could say the storyline progression is slow but you can feel the build up in plot every chapter. It’s not like those ****ty web novels where suddenly people just decide to kill the mc out of no other reason than “I hate him/her” and with no other reason than “I hate him/her because I hate him/her.” This type of novel isn’t exactly a hard read—it’s really just leisure reading and doesn’t make you use your brain a lot, but it’s not like those vapid and senseless web novels that have literally no realistic aspect in terms of character and plot creation. I give it a 4/5 just because I consider it to be nothing more than just a good leisure read.
I am so hooked on this book. I truly love the plot, intrigue and cannot wait to find out all of the happenings. Reading the first 40 chapters was the biggest tease yet, and I want more.
invisible dragon was now dying.....
I love this book and the way the author just let's it flow. The slightly domineering MC, the awesome events. I'm (for no better words) am in love with this book, and maybe... *the author*. Alright I've ranted enough, for newcomers read to at least chapter 20. I hope this review helps.
Reviewing for an event.The writing is not too bad, but there’s too much exposition. The story seems to drag.Take this with a grain of salt, for I read too little of the novel.Well, the narrative is first person, which is uncommon here, and a nice change of pace.Hope the author keeps writing!
please mia mother is in harem I want authorpreeeetyy please ? ? ? ? ?
Out of the box concept of demonsvery interestingbut the chapters are a bit too short
This is a very nice and entertaining novel
Navi from the avatar?Very very good I'm intrigued all your books are amazingDid you stop writing luna's eclipse?? You haven't updated it in a while
As a professor of depravities, I approve of this novel ^.^Amazing level of lewd description in these chapters, I shall use this entire novel as 'study material'Hehe.. hehehehhe
Truly a really engaging story with very well developed charcters. This story has been a really enjoyable read that is really unique in how it has really focused on the emotional and character development side of the story rather than just on plot. I really appeciate that the author has not put a price on any of the chapters and it’s clear that they are writing this story because they are passionate about it. If you have a method of donation that takes less of a cut, I would totally be open to donate to you! (Unless you do actually want us to donate through gifts in WN) From all the web novels I have read so far, this story is one of my favourites in that I really enjoy how much personality all the characters have and I like that this story is willing on focusing on the emotional challenges and developments of all the characters. For example, many other novels gloss over how it might feel to actually kill someone or sentient being or only mention it for a few paragraphs but I like that this story actually shows James’ development for better or for worse in a manner that feels realistic and human like. Another aspect that I really enjoy about this novel is the very frequent perspective changes that occur. I think this really helps flesh out each of the characters and continue developing the background in addition to making it feel like every character is living out their own lives while the story continues progressing. Trickster’s Apostle really utilizes writing through different perspectives more than any other web novel I have read and I find it very enjoyable.To the author, thank you for also having artwork made which wasn’t something you needed to do but I appreciate that you put the effort to do so anyways. To potential readers, while it is not something I am expecting from the author, it should be noted that the release schedule of this novel is pretty loose and not very consistent. Of course there is no point in rushing an author to release anything, I think you should just keep that in mind.Now to discuss areas that could be further improved:While I feel that the characters are very well developed, the background does not. While areas are mentioned and I have a general understanding of how this world is set up, I feel that there is still more room to develop the actual world and how it is like. Outside of the school and some specific locations, many areas of the world have each only really been described in a few paragraphs. At the same time, unlike other novels I don’t feel like this lack of detail is particularly detrimental to the story because the plot/events we are focusing on aren’t very reliant on it? (Even I don’t fully understand why I don’t find this to be that big of an issue for this story in particular)In general, I think this story is really engaging and unique in its focus on the characters which I find really enjoyable. I look forward to following this story and I think I will edit this review with any feedback I would have as the story continues. This is one of my favourite web novels and I really want to see how it will develop!