Yes yes, the classic self reviewing author.Anyway, at minimum I'm doing 1 chapter per day, but shooting to release 2 chapters. We'll see how that goes. Feel free to leave a review or comment. I'm trying to improve so I'll take your feedback seriously.
A very good novel to pick up, Although there are a few grammar mistakes, i'm willing to look past that since english hard. The novel grabs your attention from chapter 1 and keeps you engaged all the way through but most importantly, this novel is home to the legendary Patrick. A man so legendary that his name will be passed down for centuries to come. As much as i would love to go on a essay long rant on the mega-chadliness that only makes up a fraction of Patrick's godly appeal. I feel it more important to bring up that this novel is a hidden gem that only gets better as you go on, even if it's partly due to Patrick.
Honestly this is one of the better original novels I’ve read on this app and I’ve read quite a bit. I think my most favorite part of this novel would be the facts that you learn from this novel as most of them are pretty accurate however the power system might change as I’m only on chapter 34. Overall the release rate is pretty good considering the content and story building. You can tell the author actually thinks and research’s stuff before he writes it down (he takes his time). Story building is great, but it can be improved slightly if he lets his readers gives some ideas to help improve it as a 2nd opinion would be great. 5/5 great novel.
Just a great story.A unique story also loved the charactaers and the chemistry between them.l Really Love It..........just hope it continues
Since it's only one chapter so I cannot say much but as I read your story, the characters seems likeable and the storyline looks interesting and it was a nice reading with minor grammar mistakes, as I've seen so far. Keep up the good work, author :)
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Una historia con un enfoque que aunque no es unico esta bien desarrollado con una trama hasta ahora bien construida y con un enorme margen para explotar
Don't be fooled by the people giving this 5 stars and talking about how good this is, this is generic MC is an idot he'll get pussy wipped before 100 chaps.Don't waste your time on this generic ****.
Originality is dead.
it's a common Chinese novel where mc doesn't do much but others think highly of him and his enemies don't use logic and all the side characters are stupid and only MCs family find faults with those bad guys acting as good guys.classic cliches are everywhere, well it's not a system novel like most but the cheat would've been better if it was a system. MC's family can buy things that families of high level wants but they cannot buy it. I mean 9th grade family can buy a pearl that patriarch of 7th grade family needs and none of the other families under them buys it, but MCs family thought of buying it and his enemy family which is also a 9th grade family bought it. and mc is sure that they won't give it as a gift to patriarch of the 7th grade sect
This book really is the Holy Book, do not drop it, please ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????
it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.it looks good but can be improved specialy MC :) he is a little annoying and strory devolops so fast I think.