nice concept //................................ but do not stop story or it will be ruined,...........................................................................................................................................
Great story hoping increase in upload schedule and fast development of storyline. That's all????????????
A lot of potential, but with poor execution. There are too many times that the story contradicts itself. Moreover the MC is too OP and everybody follows him without ever questioning him from the first moment they meet him. Finally this story should really need some editing, there are so many errors that are even indicated by the readers, but the author didn’t bother to correct them....
If you can get past the authors views it is a decent story with a ton of potentialOn-time updatesMeh character design (15 yo murderer with no qualms about killing though this is sort of explained)Pretty good quality compared to othersIn no ways is it perfect but it has good qualitiesP.S I dont think the authors views should be taken into account when rating the quality of a story
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Really enjoyed this. It is like reading about a legalized murder hobo who is good at what he does.--------------------------------------------I would like to see this get picked up
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Is this a novel written by a professional or a novel written by a middle schooler? Author can't even do calculations properly for a video game? Needs 1k for first level apparently but 50k+ experience still wouldn't make the MC level up to 10+? Did the author fail math so badly that he tried his hand at writing fiction? Did he not know that if you're going to use math stuff in a fiction that it actually has to...well...add up properly?I feel this book is a disgrace for a good translation group like Atlas Studios to translate. Not only does this feel like a fanfic of something but it's a badly written fanfic. So many things are forced into being out of no where just to establish a connection.I feel like my brain cells are being killed off when I read some of the BS in this novel. Not going to give it a more detailed review. This novel is not worthy of it.
No personality. No meaningful characters. No direction or plot. Feels like the author just ripped off ideas he liked from other novels and taped them together.
7 Chapters in, and if the story's gonna go on like this I'm out. Mc's relationships feel way too forced, or maybe people in that world are just all that way? Original premise, not my cup of tea. MC too blunt. Feels like he wouldn't be able to keep any secrets and will just boldly expose all his information. Whatever I hate it, but it doesn't mean you will so here's the honest rating.Writing Quality 4.5/5 - Too many curse words for me, it just throws me off. Stability of Updates 5/5 - Dunno, just started it. Story Development 4.5/5 - Dunno. Character Design 5/5 - No cardboard or cookie cutter. Pretty original.World Background 2/5 - Just 7 chapters in, but I'm hating both the mmo and the real world. And the reasons mc is where he is. Whatever.