the writing needs a lot of work. I gave everything else 3 stars because the writing was so distracting that couldn't commit anything else to memory.
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The Chinese characters aren't even gone right now. When the translation gets fixed, then I'll give an actual review in the comments. But until the novels gets fixed, I have no positives for this.
So far I'm on chapter 74 and it's really good. Something things are annoying though. 1. There's no tags so fewer people are going to find the book. 2. The MC is pretty good but I want him to accept more disciples/assistants/minions and give them unique [Dao Foundations] pertaining to their specialties. Maybe even make a sect/guild/group that's only requirement is a very high comprehension. Also would a mixture of [Time Dao] and [Karma Dao] = Time Travel? 3. I would prefer if the author put important stuff in brackets [] like cultivation realms, sects, groups, contienants, etc because it's easier to read that way. Heres my major questions, can he use the time dao to speed up the growth of medical plants, and can he use it to look into the past.
I made it to chapter 380, but for me I just can't continue. The writing is good, but someone early complained about author using names instead of pronouns, and they obliged. However author should have kept with names as the use of pronouns is wrong about 95% of the time.The MC is ok and is essentially along for the ride as all the girls around him are like that Noob in a MMORPG who accidentally pulls the boss when your trying clear the room every raid/dungeon. The girls bring all the trouble to the MC and so far pretty much the MC is not strong enough to take them on and has to be protected.. But then the women tell him he needs to get stronger (the ones targeting are 3-5 realms!! higher than him). Liang Xi is the worst of the bunch as she always complains about him needing focus on cultivation and getting stronger, but is also the one throwing all these troublesome women at him like she is feeding the birds.. This is on story I actually sympathize with the MC as every one around him just makes his life a CLUSTER $*@)!...He can't cultivate for more than a couple hours as he is either Banging all these women or is in a situation out of his control.. I could continue if the MC would just finally snap at Liang Xi with the cold hard truth from above.. But unfortunately we get "I need to get stronger.
If you're into dual cultivation su yang novel,you would definitely love this as this novel ngl is alot more better as the story pacing + development have been really well done plus all the girls that was introduced into the harem have well written character setting + background story. 10/10 story that you won't regret reading!
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this garbage for several reasons but the number 1 reason is you can only read eight chapters and those chapters sucked exponentially
The writer of this novel is a brazilian youtuber called "Zy" that was exposed a few months ago for exchanging nude pictures with an underage girl that was one of his subscribers. She was around 15.
Why does some people drop bad reviews?? Maybe some people don't like the story or just straight out toxic... Anyway this is like Low Dimension Game but much better.!!!!! I mean f*ck*ng MORE BETTER... The adding of the player was good in my opinion..The beginning was rough but after that it is very good...What I like the most is the history of world.. It get the idea in our prehistoric history...The story is quite logical( if you ignore the sorcery,alchemy and etc...)Overall, it was a good novel...Hope that this will be picked...But I doubt that this will be picked...Because the editor don't know how to choose and has pea sized brain......?!!!!!!
Better then most Good jobAnd most amazing the patern is really good i mean u could enjoy 100 episodes a day easilyI mean i do haha Just bit expensive
He made the novel premium promising to make it better ... Its not ... The translation is still bad and shows no signs of improvement ... He also slowed down the story speed so that he can milk this for everything its worth.